Dec. 21, 2021
25-26-27 three days holiday
Some countries don’t have that three days as holiday.
I consider that is one of the best holidays for me.
Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends.
I can really make use this three day to get to know them more.
Getting acquaintance with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
Knowing them more is interesting just reading a story of life from another person.
Although I am already 50’s I still can learn many knowledges from young people.
Best decision I made in this year.
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25-26-27 three days hChristmas Three-Day Holidays
Christmas Three-Day Holidays
Putting the numbers in the title sounds a bit odd
Some countries don’t have thatose three days as holidays.
Some countries don’t have those three days as holidays.
"those" for plural
Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends.
I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more. I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more.
Getting acquaintanced with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
Getting acquainted with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
KnowGetting them more iso know them better is more interesting than just rheadring athe story of their life from another person.
Getting to know them better is more interesting than just hearing the story of their life from another person.
Changed a few word choices for naturalness.
Although I am already in my 50’s, I still can learn many knowledgesuch from young people.
Although I am already in my 50’s, I still can learn much from young people.
"knowledge" is basically never used in plural.
Best decision I made in this year.
Best decision I made this year.
Using "in" isn't that natural here
Feedback
Well-written :) Grammar-wise and judging by the sentence-structure, you did quite well, just some word choice mistakes.
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I can really make use this three day to get to know them more. I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more. I can really make use of this three day to get to know them more. |
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25-26-27 three days holiday
Putting the numbers in the title sounds a bit odd |
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Some countries don’t have that three days as holiday.
Some countries don’t have th "those" for plural |
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I consider that is one of the best holidays for me. |
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Since I transfer to a new work place and I make a lot of new friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Getting acquaintance with co-workers gives me confidence while working.
Getting acquaint |
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Knowing them more is interesting just reading a story of life from another person.
Changed a few word choices for naturalness. |
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Although I am already 50’s I still can learn many knowledges from young people.
Although I am already in my 50’s, I still can learn m "knowledge" is basically never used in plural. |
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Best decision I made in this year.
Best decision I made Using "in" isn't that natural here |
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