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Writing Challenge, Day 93

Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge. I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.

I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do. In a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow. They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe! They are children whose wishes I will respect.

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Writing Challenge, Day 93

Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.

I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do.

They are children whose wishes I will respect.

Writing Challenge, Day 93

Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.

I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.

They are children whose wishes I will respect.

Writing Challenge, Day 93

Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.

They are children whose wishes I will respect.

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courageuse19

Jan. 16, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 93

Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.

They are children whose wishes I will respect.

Writing Challenge, Day 93


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Today is the 93rd day of my daily English challenge.


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I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals.


I want to achieve all the goals I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goals. I want to achieve all the goals I have prepared for this new year.

I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goalsof them. I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all of them.

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I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all the goalsof them. I have prepared my goals for this new year and I want to achieve all of them.

I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do.


I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do. I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to.

I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to docook. I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to cook.

I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to do. I cooked everything that my nephew and nieces asked me to.

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In a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow.


In just a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow's menu. In just a few minutes I wrote tomorrow's menu.

In a few minutes I wroill write the menu ofor tomorrow. In a few minutes I will write the menu for tomorrow.

This is future tense.

In a few minutes I wrote the menu of tomorrow's menu. In a few minutes I wrote tomorrow's menu.

In a few minutes I wrote the menu ofor tomorrow. In a few minutes I wrote the menu for tomorrow.

They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe!


They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk for her.😄😂Strange recipe! They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and last she asked me to cook pasta with milk for her.😄😂Strange recipe!

Not sure what "thier" is. If you meant their, then them would be the correct pronoun in this sentence.

This is what they asked me to cook for thier : T: tacos for my nephew, Rrice with chicken for my older niece and last shmy younger niece asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe! This is what they asked me to cook: tacos for my nephew, rice with chicken for my older niece and my younger niece asked me to cook her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe!

I've never heard of pasta with milk. I wonder where she heard about this.

They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos, for my nephew, R; rice with chicken, for my older niece; and last of all she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂S for her.😄😂 A strange recipe! They asked me to cook: Tacos, for my nephew; rice with chicken, for my older niece; and last of all she asked me to cook pasta with milk for her.😄😂 A strange recipe!

They asked me to cook for thier : Tacos for my nephew, Rrice with chicken for my older niece and last shmy younger niece asked me to cook for her pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe! They asked me to cook: Tacos for my nephew, rice with chicken for my older niece and my younger niece asked me to cook pasta with milk.😄😂Strange recipe!

The meaning of what you have written is easily able to be understood. The changes made have improved the style so it looks and reads more naturally.

They asked me to cook for thier em: Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and at last / finally she asked me to cook for her pasta with milk for her .😄😂Strange recipe! They asked me to cook for them: Tacos for my nephew, Rice with chicken for my older niece and at last / finally she asked me to cook pasta with milk for her .😄😂Strange recipe!

Their = belonging to them

They are children whose wishes I will respect.


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