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Religion for Atheist

I should type Religion for an Atheist maybe. Because there can be different types. There was a science-based one. But scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo). I don’t mean Science like a cult. I mean science could be a pseudoscience. In addition, so called atheists could go in for astrology, esoteric etc. There is a word Asur in Bhagavad Gita, some dictionary said that means a demon-atheist. I think it’s funny. Should I use a Pure Atheist?
All that doesn’t matter. I don’t care and you don’t take it to heart, too.
I read (listened an audio) Strugatsky brothers’ science fiction novel A Billion Years Before the End of the World, sometimes called Definitely Maybe. Some persons faced irresistible forces. I decided to make short summary. The end.

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Religion for the Atheist

My use of "the" here would usually be a bit odd, but because of your next sentence, I think it works like this.

Actually, maybe I should type "Religion for an Atheist maybe".

Because there can be different types.

There was a science-based one.

But a scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo).

As another user has noted, I don't know what a "flamen" is, nor do I know "woodoo".

I don’t mean Sscience is like a cult.

I mean science could be a pseudoscience.

In addition, so -called atheists could go infall for astrology, and other esoteric etcbeliefs.

"Go in for" feels a little odd here. "Fall for" is something we'd say if someone is, for instance, tricked into believing something, or pranked.

Also, I agree with curious owl's note about "esoteric" here.

There is a word Asur inin the Bhagavad Gita, some: "Asur". A dictionary said that means a demon-atheist.

I think it’s funny.

Should I use a P"pure Aatheist"?

All that doesn’tNone of this matters.

This is a phrasing you'll probably hear more often.

I don’t care, and you dwon’t take it to heart, too either.

Saying "and you don't take it to heart" sounds like a demand.

Also, in a negative sentence (with "don't", "won't", etc), it feels more natural to me to use "either" instead of "too".

I read (listened anto audio)

the Strugatsky brothers’ science fiction novel , "A Billion Years Before the End of the World", sometimes called "Definitely

Maybe".

I don't know why LangCorrect separated it like this. Whoops.

Some personsople have faced irresistible forces.

I decided to make a short summary.

The end.

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On surveys, I've seen the term "non-affiliate" used to mean someone who isn't affiliated with any church or religious institution (although they may still be spiritual in some other way). I also know another fancier word, which is "secular": having no religious beliefs or faith.

Religion for Atheist

It has to be either:
Religion for AtheistS
or
Religion for an Atheist

I should type Rreligion for an Aatheist maybe.

No need to capitalise these words here, even if you are talking about the title.

Because there can be different types.

Of what? It is a bit unclear what you mean here - I assume different types of religions?

There was a science-based one.

But scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo).

I think that "flamen" and "woodoo" are such niche words that you need to define what they mean for your readers. I Googled flamen and it seems to be a Roman priest? But I'm not sure what you mean with woodoo.

I don’t mean Sscience like a cult.

No need to capitalise science here.

In addition, so me so-called atheists could go in for astrology, esoteric, etc.

Esoteric what? It is an adjective, so it needs a noun here. For example, astrology and other esoteric beliefs. Although a better word here could be unfounded, as in unfounded beliefs.

A list sounds better if it has 3 examples before the etc.
For example --> astrology, phrenology, homeopathy, etc (just some examples I think could fit with your list, you can replace them)

There is a word "Asur" in the Bhagavad Gita, which some dictionary said thaties say means a "demon-atheist".

I put quote around "asur" to indicate that it is the word you are talking about, and around "demon-atheist" because you are quoting the dictionaries you mentioned.

I'm not sure if you need to capitalise asur here either? Only capitaise it if its a name of person, specific place, or organisation, or a title --> eg. John, Canada, the World Health Organisation. The Bhagavad Gita SHOULD be capitalised as it's the title of book.

I think it’s funny.

Should I use a P"pure Aatheist"?

No need for capitalisation here.

I put quotes here as you are proposing a new term.

All that doesn’t matter.

I don’t care and you don’shouldn't take it to heart, tooeither.

Shouldn't works better here, as you are advising the reader on what they should do.

I read (listened an audio)

Strugatsky brothers’ science fiction novel A Billion Years Before the End of the World, sometimes called Definitely

Maybe.

Some personsople faced irresistibleoverwhelming forces.

Irresistible = typically means resisting temptation, eg. a freshly baked cake is irresistible

The plural of person is typically people. I think persons is mostly only used in legal documents.

Even better, you could say: In the book, a small group of people face overwhelming forces.

I decided to make short summary.

The end.

Feedback

Excellent work - and a very interesting subject as well!

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Thank you, curious_owl!

Religion for Atheist


Religion for Atheist

It has to be either: Religion for AtheistS or Religion for an Atheist

Religion for the Atheist

My use of "the" here would usually be a bit odd, but because of your next sentence, I think it works like this.

I should type Religion for an Atheist maybe.


I should type Rreligion for an Aatheist maybe.

No need to capitalise these words here, even if you are talking about the title.

Actually, maybe I should type "Religion for an Atheist maybe".

Because there can be different types.


Because there can be different types.

Of what? It is a bit unclear what you mean here - I assume different types of religions?

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There was a science-based one.


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But scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo).


But scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo).

I think that "flamen" and "woodoo" are such niche words that you need to define what they mean for your readers. I Googled flamen and it seems to be a Roman priest? But I'm not sure what you mean with woodoo.

But a scientist could become a flamen (a woodoo).

As another user has noted, I don't know what a "flamen" is, nor do I know "woodoo".

I don’t mean Science like a cult.


I don’t mean Sscience like a cult.

No need to capitalise science here.

I don’t mean Sscience is like a cult.

I mean science could be a pseudoscience.


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In addition, so called atheists could go in for astrology, esoteric etc.


In addition, so me so-called atheists could go in for astrology, esoteric, etc.

Esoteric what? It is an adjective, so it needs a noun here. For example, astrology and other esoteric beliefs. Although a better word here could be unfounded, as in unfounded beliefs. A list sounds better if it has 3 examples before the etc. For example --> astrology, phrenology, homeopathy, etc (just some examples I think could fit with your list, you can replace them)

In addition, so -called atheists could go infall for astrology, and other esoteric etcbeliefs.

"Go in for" feels a little odd here. "Fall for" is something we'd say if someone is, for instance, tricked into believing something, or pranked. Also, I agree with curious owl's note about "esoteric" here.

There is a word Asur in Bhagavad Gita, some dictionary said that means a demon-atheist.


There is a word "Asur" in the Bhagavad Gita, which some dictionary said thaties say means a "demon-atheist".

I put quote around "asur" to indicate that it is the word you are talking about, and around "demon-atheist" because you are quoting the dictionaries you mentioned. I'm not sure if you need to capitalise asur here either? Only capitaise it if its a name of person, specific place, or organisation, or a title --> eg. John, Canada, the World Health Organisation. The Bhagavad Gita SHOULD be capitalised as it's the title of book.

There is a word Asur inin the Bhagavad Gita, some: "Asur". A dictionary said that means a demon-atheist.

I think it’s funny.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Should I use a Pure Atheist?


Should I use a P"pure Aatheist"?

No need for capitalisation here. I put quotes here as you are proposing a new term.

Should I use a P"pure Aatheist"?

All that doesn’t matter.


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All that doesn’tNone of this matters.

This is a phrasing you'll probably hear more often.

I don’t care and you don’t take it to heart, too.


I don’t care and you don’shouldn't take it to heart, tooeither.

Shouldn't works better here, as you are advising the reader on what they should do.

I don’t care, and you dwon’t take it to heart, too either.

Saying "and you don't take it to heart" sounds like a demand. Also, in a negative sentence (with "don't", "won't", etc), it feels more natural to me to use "either" instead of "too".

I read (listened an audio)


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I read (listened anto audio)

Strugatsky brothers’ science fiction novel A Billion Years Before the End of the World, sometimes called Definitely


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the Strugatsky brothers’ science fiction novel , "A Billion Years Before the End of the World", sometimes called "Definitely

Maybe.


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Maybe".

I don't know why LangCorrect separated it like this. Whoops.

Some persons faced irresistible forces.


Some personsople faced irresistibleoverwhelming forces.

Irresistible = typically means resisting temptation, eg. a freshly baked cake is irresistible The plural of person is typically people. I think persons is mostly only used in legal documents. Even better, you could say: In the book, a small group of people face overwhelming forces.

Some personsople have faced irresistible forces.

I decided to make short summary.


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I decided to make a short summary.

The end.


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