Dec. 29, 2021
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Recently, I've found that I have good feelings about English writing. I feel I can write better than before.
Before, I was struggling with writing English essays. I didn't know what words I should use, as well as what tenses, what prepositions, singular or plural and so on.
Just a couple of weeks ago, two people gave me two suggestions when they corrected my essays.
One told me that I should try to be concise, and another suggested that I should break up the chunky essays into paragraphs according to different contents.
After hearing them, my English writing level suddenly improved so much, and my head became very clear while I wrote.
Since then, it has become easy when I write English essays.
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Recently, I've found that I have good feelings about English writingwriting in English.
Recently, I've found that I have good feelings about writing in English.
I feel I can write better than before.
Before, I was struggling with writing essays in English essays.
Before, I was struggling with writing essays in English.
I didn't know what words I should use, as well as what tenses, what prepositions, singular or plural and so on.
Just a couple of weeks ago, two people gave me two suggestions when they corrected my essays.
One told me that I should try to be concise, and another suggested that I should break up the chunky essays into paragraphs according to different contenttopics.
One told me that I should try to be concise, and another suggested that I should break up the chunky essays into paragraphs according to different topics.
After hearing them, my English writing levelwriting in English suddenly improved so much / a lot, and my head has now becaome verymuch clearer while I wroite.
After hearing them, my writing in English suddenly improved so much / a lot, and my head has now become much clearer while I write.
"So much" is rather colloquial and doesn't fit in with the tone of the rest of the writing
Since then, it has become easy when I write essays in English essays.
Since then, it has become easy when I write essays in English.
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It's good to read about your progress. Most of my corrections are merely stylistic, so that's a good sign.
Dec. 29, 2021
Thank you very much for correcting my journal. I appreciate it so much.
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Recently, I've found that I have good feelings about English writing.
Recently, I've found that I have good feelings about |
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I feel I can write better than before. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before, I was struggling with writing English essays.
Before, I was struggling with writing essays in English |
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I didn't know what words I should use, as well as what tenses, what prepositions, singular or plural and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just a couple of weeks ago, two people gave me two suggestions when they corrected my essays. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One told me that I should try to be concise, and another suggested that I should break up the chunky essays into paragraphs according to different contents.
One told me that I should try to be concise, and another suggested that I should break up the chunky essays into paragraphs according to different |
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After hearing them, my English writing level suddenly improved so much, and my head became very clear while I wrote.
After hearing them, my "So much" is rather colloquial and doesn't fit in with the tone of the rest of the writing |
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Since then, it has become easy when I write English essays.
Since then, it has become easy when I write essays in English |
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