Of course, there is part ofly the fear of getting diabetes. Of course, there is partly the fear of getting diabetes.

I would word it as 'partly the fear'. You could also say '...there is the fear of getting diabetes' or '...part of it is the fear of getting diabetes' :)

Of course, there is part of it's partly due to a fear of getting diabetes. Of course, it's partly due to a fear of getting diabetes.

This topic reminds me of those old days. This topic reminds me of the old days.

You're more likely to hear 'the old days' rather than 'those' :)

This topic reminds me of those old days. This topic reminds me of the old days.

At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I. So, I'd often get prouexcited if I could eat some sugar. At that time, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar. So, I'd often get excited if I could eat some sugar.

If living conditions were generally poor 'the living conditions' is ok. If you are talking about only your family then I would say 'our living conditions'. 'Proud' can mean pleased but most people will think you mean proud as in 'confident/high self-estem'. 'Excited' works better with the context or even 'happy' :)

At that timeBack then, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I was often get prouexcited if I couldgot to eat some sugar. Back then, the living conditions were very poor and we could rarely eat sugar, so I was often excited if I got to eat some sugar.

Maybe it was just for when our relatives visited us, and our parents would treat them with sugar water. Maybe it was just for when our relatives visited us and our parents would treat them with sugar water.

Swapped comma for 'and' :)

Maybe it was just wWhen our relatives visited us, our parents would treat them with this sugar water. When our relatives visited us, our parents would treat them with this sugar water.

I forget since when I didn'tstopped eat sugar at allcompletely because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, and we can eat at restaurants so often and eat fruit every day. I forget when I stopped eat sugar completely because nowadays our living conditions have improved a lot and we can eat at restaurants often and eat fruit every day.

The first part of the sentence is understandable but I have changed it to how I would say it. Taken out a couple of commas also :)

I forget since when I dicouldn't eat sugar at all because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, andso we can eat at restaurants so oftenwhenever we want and eat fruit every day. I forget when I couldn't eat sugar at all because nowadays, our living conditions have improved a lot, so we can eat at restaurants whenever we want and eat fruit every day.

You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits there are, they all contain a lot of sugar, so. So, even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained in food in your daily life. You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits there are, they all contain a lot of sugar. So, even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar contained in food in your daily life.

Added 'there are' to help it flow better :)

You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, there is still a lot of sugar- contained foodyou will still consume a lot of sugar in your daily life. You know, no matter what food is made in restaurants or what kind of fruits, they all contain a lot of sugar, so even if you don't eat sugar, you will still consume a lot of sugar in your daily life.

It was a bit redundant

Therefore, your body is never lacksow on sugar nowadays. Therefore, your body is never low on sugar nowadays.

This is a more native way of saying it :)

Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either. Even if you don't eat sugar, your body doesn't lack sugar either.

Not sure what this means