Jan. 24, 2025
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燠の虚
落下夕焼け
流れ星
おきのそら
らっかゆうやけ
ながれぼし
長崎市の夕日を見ながら、これを書いた。
燠の虚
落下夕焼け
流れ星
おきのそら
らっかゆうやけ
ながれぼし
長崎市の夕日を見ながら、これを書いた。
「燠の虚」ってあまり聞かない言葉だけど、どんな意味？
Jan. 25, 2025
I used 燠 to represent embers or live charcoal, as I feel like watching the embers of a fire flicker makes people thoughtful, and perhaps be reminded of the ephemerality of life. 虚 was a better kanji to use than 空 in this context, as I felt like 虚 gives a more empty feeling of a vast, empty sky, much like outer space. When combined together, I feel like someone could imagine the soft flickering of burning embers amongst a void of nothing, which gives both a peaceful and existential feeling. I thought it might paint a picture of transience. What do you think?
Jan. 25, 2025
Oh, you write such a deep meaning in your Haiku !
Haiku sometimes uses special words to express the feeling of the writer.
Actually I don't know much about Haiku, and could not understand it....but after reading your explanation, I think it's good for you to select the kanji.
Jan. 25, 2025
I'm glad you think so, thank you!
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燠の虚 落下夕焼け 流れ星 おきのそら らっかゆうやけ ながれぼし 長崎市の夕日を見ながら、これを書いた。
燠の虚 「燠の虚」ってあまり聞かない言葉だけど、どんな意味？ |
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