Feb. 17, 2021
Se7en
The other day, I watched "Seven" filmed by David Fincher. The movie was interesting and shocking. Throughout the whole scene except the last scene, it's raining. The rain was gloomy, which matches the story. Before watching it, I watched "Fight Club" that Brad Pitt also played the lead. I think David Fincher and Brad Pitt make a good team. Therefore, I'll watch "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button".
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Se7en
The other day, I watched "Seven", a filmed by David Fincher.
The other day, I watched "Seven", a film by David Fincher.
It's more usual to say "a film by..." than "filmed by..."
The movie was interesting and shocking.
Throughout the whole scenefilm except the last scene, it's raining.
Throughout the whole film except the last scene, it's raining.
The rain was gloomy, which matches the story.
Before watching it, I watched "Fight Club" thatin which Brad Pitt also played the lead.
Before watching it, I watched "Fight Club" in which Brad Pitt also played the lead.
"in which..." instead of "that..."
I think David Fincher and Brad Pitt make a good team.
Therefore, I'll watch "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button".
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Very good, just some little stylistic corrections :-)
Feb. 17, 2021
Se7en was such a good movie! I remember counting through the "seven deadly sins" to try and see which one might come next. Such a creepy movie!
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Se7en This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The other day, I watched "Seven" filmed by David Fincher.
The other day, I watched "Seven", a film It's more usual to say "a film by..." than "filmed by..." |
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The movie was interesting and shocking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Throughout the whole scene except the last scene, it's raining.
Throughout the whole |
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The rain was gloomy, which matches the story. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before watching it, I watched "Fight Club" that Brad Pitt also played the lead.
Before watching it, I watched "Fight Club" "in which..." instead of "that..." |
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I think David Fincher and Brad Pitt make a good team. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, I'll watch "The Curious Case of Benjamin Button". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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