Today, my parents came to my living housevisit from the small village where I was born. Today, my parents came to visit from the village

Today my parents came to my living house from the small village where I was born. Today my parents came to my house from the small village where I was born.

Today my parents came to my living house from the small village where I was born. Today my parents came to my house from the small village where I was born.

"my house" already implies the house you live in.

They tookcame with a lots of food I liked eatingthat I enjoyed when I was young, and I was so touchpleased. They came with a lot of food that I enjoyed when I was young, and I was so pleased.

They tookbrought lots of food I liked eating when I was young, and I was so touched. They brought lots of food I liked eating when I was young and I was so touched.

Alternate suggestion: "They brought lots of food I liked eating when I was young. I was so touched."

They tookbrought lots of food I liked eating when I was young, and I was so touched. They brought lots of food I liked eating when I was young, and I was so touched.

"they took lots of food" focuses on the food coming out of their house, but for this kind of topic in English, it's more focus on the food arriving at your house, and using "brought" instead of "took" does this.

They have worked hard all their lifetime,ves and been frugal with money, and they save moneysaving for their children, even although we have beenare now adults. They have worked hard all their lives and been frugal with money, saving for their children, even though we are now adults.

This makes you sound confident and direct.

They have worked hard all their lifetime, and have been frugal with money, and they've been saveing money for their children although we have beendespite us being adults. They have worked hard all their life, and have been frugal with money, and they've been saving money for their children despite us being adults.

The main thing to remember for this sentence is to keep the tense the same: "have worked" = past-tense "have been frugal" = past-tense "save money" = present-tense X Also, since you (the children) are still adults, saying "been adults" doesn't make sense (because it implies that you are no-longer adults).

They have worked hard all their lifetime, and been frugal with money, and they save money for their children although we have beenare (now) adults. They have worked hard all their lifetime, and been frugal with money, and they save money for their children although we are (now) adults.

"We have been adults" would imply you are no longer adults. "although we are now adults" puts a little more focus on the contrast between now and the time when you weren't adults than a simple "although we are adults" would, but both work grammatically.