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jonacevallos

Feb. 16, 2026

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Day of work

Today i wake up at 9 o’clock. I had for breakfast two toast with peanut batter and cheese. After that I went to the garage to take the van for work. At 11 We repaired and painted a door of the electricity room and then we went to apartment next to beach for fix a pipe of water.
At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty minutes for lunch. This afternoon we going to warehouse for buy more materials for tomorrow.

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Day of workWorkday

Today iI waoke up at 9 o’clock.

I had for breakfast twotwo pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

After that I went to the garage to take the van forto work.

At 11 Wwe repaired and painted a door of the electricity room and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

I suspect you meant to write "...painted the door of the electricity room", but your sentence makes sense. Technically it could have multiple doors.

At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty -minutes break for lunch.

This afternoon we going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

I had for breakfast twotwo slices of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

Moving 'for breakfast' to the end of the sentence makes it sound more natural. You can also use 'pieces' instead of 'slices.' You need to have one of these two because toasts aren't able to be counted on their own like bread, which has to be counted in loaves or slices.

After that, I went to the garage to take the van for work.

At 11 Wam we repaired and painted athe door of the electricity room and then we went to the apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty minutes break for lunch.

This sounds more natural. You could even say 'I have a thirty minute lunch break.'

This afternoon we're going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

'to' is used when saying what you are going to accomplish (doing this 'to' get that).

Today iI waoke up at 9 o’clock.

I had fFor breakfast twoI had two pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese.

After that I went to the garage to take the van for work.

At 11 W:00 we repaired and painted a door tof the electricity room, and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 2:30 pm I haved a break of thirty minutes for lunch.

This afternoon we are going to a warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

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Good job!

Today i, I waoke up at 9 o’clock.

I had for breakfast twotwo pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

You could also say: For breakfast, I had two pieces of toast with peanut butter and cheese.

After that, I went to the garage to take the van for work.

At 11 Wam, we repaired and painted athe door of the electricity room and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 2:30 pm, I haved a break of thirty minutes for lunch break.

This afternoon, we are going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

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Very good! Just be careful with past and present tense forms because it sounds like some of your activities for the day had already happened. Example: wake -> woke, have -> had

Day of work


Day of workWorkday

Today i wake up at 9 o’clock.


Today i, I waoke up at 9 o’clock.

Today iI waoke up at 9 o’clock.

Today iI waoke up at 9 o’clock.

I had for breakfast two toast with peanut batter and cheese.


I had for breakfast twotwo pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

You could also say: For breakfast, I had two pieces of toast with peanut butter and cheese.

I had fFor breakfast twoI had two pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese.

I had for breakfast twotwo pieces of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

I had for breakfast twotwo slices of toast with peanut bautter and cheese for breakfast.

Moving 'for breakfast' to the end of the sentence makes it sound more natural. You can also use 'pieces' instead of 'slices.' You need to have one of these two because toasts aren't able to be counted on their own like bread, which has to be counted in loaves or slices.

After that I went to the garage to take the van for work.


After that, I went to the garage to take the van for work.

After that I went to the garage to take the van for work.

After that I went to the garage to take the van forto work.

After that, I went to the garage to take the van for work.

At 11 We repaired and painted a door of the electricity room and then we went to apartment next to beach for fix a pipe of water.


At 11 Wam, we repaired and painted athe door of the electricity room and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 11 W:00 we repaired and painted a door tof the electricity room, and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 11 Wwe repaired and painted a door of the electricity room and then we went to an apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

I suspect you meant to write "...painted the door of the electricity room", but your sentence makes sense. Technically it could have multiple doors.

At 11 Wam we repaired and painted athe door of the electricity room and then we went to the apartment next to the beach forto fix a pipe of water pipe.

At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty minutes for lunch.


At 2:30 pm, I haved a break of thirty minutes for lunch break.

At 2:30 pm I haved a break of thirty minutes for lunch.

At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty -minutes break for lunch.

At 2:30 pm I have a break of thirty minutes break for lunch.

This sounds more natural. You could even say 'I have a thirty minute lunch break.'

This afternoon we going to warehouse for buy more materials for tomorrow.


This afternoon, we are going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

This afternoon we are going to a warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

This afternoon we going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

This afternoon we're going to the warehouse forto buy more materials for tomorrow.

'to' is used when saying what you are going to accomplish (doing this 'to' get that).

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