Dec. 4, 2020
Journal 12/4/20
916 Tea Garden is located in Shucheng town, Shucheng County, Anhui province. Back in 1958, on September 16, Great leader Chairman Mao Zedong inspected this tea garden. This tea garden was then owned by the Shucheng people’s commune. Chairman Mao affirmed their work and told them to be sure to open more tea gardens on the hillside. To keep in mind Chairman Mao’s entrustment, this tea garden was named 916 Tea Garden. Later, leaders at all levels made this tea garden better and better, and now, it has become a 4A-level scenic spot.
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Journal 12/4/20
916 Tea Garden is located in Shucheng tTown, Shucheng County, Anhui pProvince.
916 Tea Garden is located in Shucheng Town, Shucheng County, Anhui Province.
Either capitalize all of Town, County, and Province, or none of them. (I'm not sure which way is more standard when referring to Chinese places.)
Back in 1958, on September 16, Great lLeader Chairman Mao Zedong inspected this tea garden.
Back in 1958, on September 16, Great Leader Chairman Mao Zedong inspected this tea garden.
If "Great Leader" is a title, then capitalize both words.
This tea garden was then owned by the Shucheng people’s commune.
Chairman Mao affirmpraised their work and told them to be sure to open more tea gardens on the hillside.
Chairman Mao praised their work and told them to be sure to open more tea gardens on the hillside.
To keep in mindcommemorate Chairman Mao’s entrustmentfaith in their endeavour, this tea garden was named 916 Tea Garden.
To commemorate Chairman Mao’s faith in their endeavour, this tea garden was named 916 Tea Garden.
Although you can definitely "entrust" something to someone, I have never heard "entrustment" as a noun.
Later, leaders at all levels made this tea garden better and better, and now, it has become a 4A-level scenic spot.
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916 Tea Garden is located in Shucheng town, Shucheng County, Anhui province.
916 Tea Garden is located in Shucheng Either capitalize all of Town, County, and Province, or none of them. (I'm not sure which way is more standard when referring to Chinese places.) |
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Back in 1958, on September 16, Great leader Chairman Mao Zedong inspected this tea garden.
Back in 1958, on September 16, Great If "Great Leader" is a title, then capitalize both words. |
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This tea garden was then owned by the Shucheng people’s commune. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Chairman Mao affirmed their work and told them to be sure to open more tea gardens on the hillside.
Chairman Mao |
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To keep in mind Chairman Mao’s entrustment, this tea garden was named 916 Tea Garden.
To Although you can definitely "entrust" something to someone, I have never heard "entrustment" as a noun. |
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Later, leaders at all levels made this tea garden better and better, and now, it has become a 4A-level scenic spot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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