I wouldn't likewant to be immortal. I wouldn't want to be immortal.

Although using the verb "like" is grammatically correct, "want" is more natural.

I wouldn't like to be immortal. I wouldn't like to be immortal.

There's no point in living forever, because everything wais made to come to an end. There's no point in living forever, because everything is made to come to an end.

There's no point in living forever, because everything wais made to come to an end. There's no point in living forever, because everything is made to come to an end.

Sounds better keeping both in present. Could also say "everything has been made to come to an end."

If I were immortal, I would feel so bored, and life would be like a prison to me. If I were immortal, I would feel so bored and life would be like a prison to me.

If I were immortal I would feel so bored, l. Life would be like a prison to me. If I were immortal I would feel so bored. Life would be like a prison to me.

2 clauses. You could also use an "and" or ";" instead of a period.

Imagine waking up everyday knowing you're never going to die, e! Even if I hadwas having a good life, I would still get bored inat some point. Imagine waking up everyday knowing you're never going to die! Even if I was having a good life, I would still get bored at some point.

Imagine waking up everyday knowing you're never going to die, e. Even if I had a good life I would get bored in some point. Imagine waking up everyday knowing you're never going to die. Even if I had a good life I would get bored in some point.

I would get into a point in life, after achieving a lot of things, thatwhere I would feel with no purpose. I would get to a point in life, after achieving a lot of things, where I would feel no purpose.

the point is a kind of "place" so where sounds more natural.

I would be likeask myself "What is left for me to do? I would ask myself "What is left for me to do?

I would be like, "What is left for me to do? or I would ask myself, "What is left for me to do? I would be like, "What is left for me to do? or I would ask myself, "What is left for me to do?

"be like" is dialect, if your audience is more formal use the second choice.

What I'mam I going to do next? What am I going to do next?

What I'mam I going to do next? What am I going to do next?

I have thmay have eternity, but with no more goals". I may have eternity, but with no more goals".

I have the eternity, but no more goals"." I have eternity, but no more goals."

Life wais meant to be this way. Life is meant to be this way.

Weren't made are not meant to last forever, because as Wif we know that we're going to die someday We take all, we will make our best efforts to do the best in this short while we're alifve. We are not meant to last forever, because if we know that we're going to die someday, we will make our best efforts to do the best while we're alive.

We weren't made to last forever, because, as Wwe know, we're going to die someday. We tmake allevery effort to do the best in this short life. We weren't made to last forever because, as we know, we're going to die someday. We make every effort to do the best in this short life.

I would reach a point in life, after achieving a lot of things, where I would feel withat I had no purpose. I would reach a point in life, after achieving a lot of things, where I would feel that I had no purpose.