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ryan1108

July 29, 2021

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2021 goal

I think it's too late to make a plan for this year.
Let me talk about how I spent my time in the past 7 months.
Start with the end of last year, I got a new offer in Taipei. My job is to maintain production yield, work with the operation team to resolve low yield issues, and ensure IC quality is good. Actually, the low yield cases rarely happen. so my life is really chill and I think this position is so perfect. And then, I got lots of free time after work off. I became addicted to game and I always spend 4 hours for it. when I lay on the bed, I always think that I would not keep this way tomorrow. But the next day, I still kept the same way. Day after day, I haven't learned any new skills at all. Here's what I want to improve list.

English
1. 100LS for listening and speaking
2. writing - to find a tutor to check my sentence
3. daily reading & listening

keep going and wish I can earn lots of money. haha

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2021 goal

I think it's too late to make a plan for this year.

My job is to maintain production yield, work with the operation team to resolve low yield issues, and ensure IC quality is good.

Day after day, I haven't learned any new skills at all.

English

1. 100LS for listening and speaking

haha

2021 goal


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I think it's too late to make a plan for this year.


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Let me talk about how I spent my time in the past 7 months.


LInstead, let me talk about how I spent my time in the past 7 months. Instead, let me talk about how I spent my time in the past 7 months.

Start with the end of last year, I got a new offer in Taipei.


Start withAt the end of last year, I got a new offer in Taipei. At the end of last year, I got a new offer in Taipei.

My job is to maintain production yield, work with the operation team to resolve low yield issues, and ensure IC quality is good.


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Actually, the low yield cases rarely happen.


Actually, the low yield cases rarely happen. Actually, low yield cases rarely happen.

so my life is really chill and I think this position is so perfect.


so myMy work life is really chill and. I think this position is so perfect for me. My work life is really chill. I think this position is perfect for me.

And then, I got lots of free time after work off.


And then, I gotI have lots of free time after work off. I have lots of free time after work.

I became addicted to game and I always spend 4 hours for it.


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when I lay on the bed, I always think that I would not keep this way tomorrow.


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Day after day, I haven't learned any new skills at all.


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Here's what I want to improve list.


Here's what I want to improve lisa list of things I want to get better at. Here's a list of things I want to get better at.

English


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1. 100LS for listening and speaking


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2. writing - to find a tutor to check my sentence 3. daily reading & listening


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keep going and wish I can earn lots of money.


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haha


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