09/24/01- Friend in my house 09/24/01- Friend in my house

092401- Friend in mMy hHouse 092401- Friend in My House

Capitalization

Yesterday, my friend came to my homeover and we made dinner together. Yesterday, my friend came over and we made dinner together.

"to my home" is correct, but to sound more natural I'd say "she came over".

Yesterday, my friend came to my homuse and we made dinner together. Yesterday, my friend came to my house and we made dinner together.

"House" may be a preference thing. Also, keep in mind that "my friend came to my house" is fairly passive.

We also haved some coffee wine. We also had some coffee wine.

past tense to match with "came to my house"

We also haved some coffee and wine. We also had some coffee and wine.

We also haved some coffee and wine. We also had some coffee and wine.

We also haved some coffee wine. We also had some coffee wine.

I was so close to correcting it to "coffee wine" before I looked it up. It's a real thing that exists.

An interesting matchcombination, I would say. An interesting combination, I would say.

An interesting matchcombination, I would say. An interesting combination, I would say.

An interesting match, I would say. An interesting match, I would say.

Great

AIt's an interesting match, I would say. It's an interesting match, I would say.

Coffee mwakes people awakeup, wine makes peoplethem sleepy, then putput them together, and a hilarious output camecome ensues: I would love to talk more but also would love to go to sleep right now. Coffee wakes people up, wine makes them sleepy, put them together and a hilarious outcome ensues: I would love to talk more but also would love to go to sleep right now.

Coffee makes people awake, and wine makes people sleepy, t. When put together, you get a hilarious output came: I would love to talk more but alsoI would also love to sleep right now. Coffee makes people awake and wine makes people sleepy. When put together, you get a hilarious output: I would love to talk more but I would also love to sleep right now.

Coffee makes people awake, wine makes people sleepy, thenand put together, was a hilarious output cameresult: I would love to talk more, but also would love to sleep right now. Coffee makes people awake, wine makes people sleepy, and put together was a hilarious result: I would love to talk more, but also would love to sleep right now.

This sounds really natural, good job

Coffee mwakes people awake, wup. Wine makes people sleepy, then put. Put them together, a hilarious output came: I would lovend it creates hilarious result: I wanted to talk more, but I also would love to sleep right nowanted to go to sleep. Coffee wakes people up. Wine makes people sleepy. Put them together, and it creates hilarious result: I wanted to talk more, but I also wanted to go to sleep.

Separated this into three sentences to make it less clunky. It was a run-on sentence before.

My friend sharesd her personal story with me. My friend shared her personal story with me.

Sometimes making friends is like a (sailor)boat meeting an iceberg. Sometimes making friends is like a (sail)boat meeting an iceberg.

Sometimes making friends is like a sailor meeting an iceberg. Sometimes making friends is like a sailor meeting an iceberg.

Sometimes, making a friends is like a sailor meeting an iceberg. Sometimes, making a friend is like a sailor meeting an iceberg.

We just browser others' 10% 10% of their life, w. When we learnget to know them better, we would understand them more. We just browse 10% of their life. When we get to know them better, we understand them more.

We just browser others' 10% life, when we learn them better, we would understand them more. We just browser others' 10% life, when we learn them better, we would understand them more.

I don't get this sentence. Could you perhaps rephrase it?

We just browser others' 10% life,see 10% of other's lives, but when we learn them better, we wcould understand them more. We just see 10% of other's lives, but when we learn them better, we could understand them more.

We just browser others' 10% life, when we learn them better, we wouldsee only about 10% of their true self at first, but when we learn more about them, we understand them more. We see only about 10% of their true self at first, but when we learn more about them, we understand them more.

I edited this to get the meaning across better. I used singular they because the saying applies to all genders.

I really appreciated her sharing, it meant tos she trusts me. I really appreciated her sharing, it means she trusts me.

Or you can say "it was a sign of trust"

I really appreciated her sharing, it meant to trust. her story. It shows she trusts me. I really appreciated her sharing her story. It shows she trusts me.

I really appreciated her sharing, it meant tohat she trusted me. I really appreciated her sharing, it meant that she trusted me.

I really appreciated her sharing, it meant to trus that. I really appreciated her sharing that.

I didn't know what "it meant to trust" meant. Does it refer to the saying she said?