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b230tri

June 17, 2022

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A rattled bus

A rattled and shabby bus is riding a road of countryside.
All I can see are rice fields.
I have to sing a country song because I live in a countryside.
Where is mama?
She lives in a city.
She hates a countryside because she grew up in a countryside.
But I like countryside because here is where I live.


Is it rhythmical enough to make a country song? Haha.

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A rattled bus

All I can see are rice fields.

Where is mama?

She lives in a city.

But I like countryside because here is where I live.

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felixir

June 18, 2022

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But I like countryside because here is where I live.

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b230tri

June 20, 2022

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A rattled bus

All I can see are rice fields.

Where is mama?

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b230tri

June 18, 2022

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June 18, 2022

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A rattled bus


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A rattled and shabby bus is riding a road of countryside.


A rattled and shabby bus is riding a road of countrysiderides along a county road. A rattled and shabby bus rides along a county road.

Or: the bus is riding along a road in the country. Or: the bus is riding along the countryside. We wouldn't say riding a road, but we do say riding a horse.

A rattled and shabby bus is dridving on a road ofin the countryside. A rattled and shabby bus is driving on a road in the countryside.

A rattled and shabby bus is dridving a road oflong the countryside. / A rattled and shabby bus is driving on the countryside road. A rattled and shabby bus is driving along the countryside. / A rattled and shabby bus is driving on the countryside road.

All I can see are rice fields.


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I have to sing a country song because I live in a countryside.


I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside. I have to sing a country song because I live in the country.

Country can be used to describe an actual country like Canada or Germany, and can also describe the land that isn't urbanized.

I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside. I have to sing a country song because I live in the countryside.

I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside. I have to sing a country song because I live in the countryside.

Where is mama?


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She lives in a city.


She lives in athe city. She lives in the city.

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She hates a countryside because she grew up in a countryside.


She hates athe countryside because she grew up in a countrysidthere. She hates the countryside because she grew up there.

She hates a countryside because she grew up in athe countryside. She hates a countryside because she grew up in the countryside.

She hates athe countryside because she grew up in a countrysidthere. She hates the countryside because she grew up there.

Your sentence is correct but using "countryside" twice sounds repetitive. This sounds more natural. :)

But I like countryside because here is where I live.


But I like the countryside because hereit is where I live. But I like the countryside because it is where I live.

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