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Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit. As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing a Chinese diary for over ten years. Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world buzzed with messages. However, I have never tried English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfect is. In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work. Little ashamed, but when professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.

As an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better). I read and collect great words, and write no word on my writing paper. No action, no mistake.

But I need to take a step to write because practice makes perfect. And I hope to meet more partners and friends on this platform to learn languages together.

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022301-The first day to start writing English Diary


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Just another way to phrase this :-)

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit.


Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems likesimilar to Reddit. Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website similar to Reddit.

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seemis like Reddit. Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that is like Reddit.

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit. Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit.

Your sentence is great! I could have typed exactly the same thing! You could replace “that seems like” with “that’s a bit like”, or “that’s similar to”, or even “that’s equivalent to”!

As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing a Chinese diary for over ten years.


As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing in a Chinese diary for over ten years. As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing in a Chinese diary for over ten years.

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world buzzed with messages.


Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world that is buzzeding with text messages. Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world that is buzzing with text messages.

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world, buzzeding with messages. Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world, buzzing with messages.

However, I have never tried English dairy before.


However, I have never tried it with an English dairy before. However, I have never tried it with an English dairy before.

However, I have never tried writing an English daiary before. However, I have never tried writing an English diary before.

However, I have never tried to write an English dairy before. However, I have never tried to write an English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfect is.


Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfection is. Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfection is.

Laziness is not the obstructionacle, but Pperfectionism is. Laziness is not the obstacle, but perfectionism is.

Laziness is not the obstructionproblem, but P“perfection” is. Laziness is not the problem, but “perfection” is.

Obstruction is a bit formal.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.


In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work. In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create classic work.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work. In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.

Actually in the English version he says "I am about to write the greatest essay of all time" 😉

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and w. When he prepared, he said to himself: , “I want to create a classic work. In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words. When he prepared, he said to himself, “I want to create a classic work.

Nothing wrong with anything you typed! I just suggest short sentences when possible :)

Little ashamed, but when professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.


Little ashamedIt's a little embarrassing, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have theis same idea. It's a little embarrassing, but when my professors ask me to write in English, I usually have this same idea.

Little ashamed, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea. Little ashamed, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.

Maybe “the same idea as Spongebob”? 👍 (I have also had this problem with perfectionism btw 😂)

As an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).


As anLike this Indian proverb that I learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do it, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better). Like this Indian proverb that I learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do it, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

As expressed in an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better). As expressed in an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

Haha! 👍 (This is very idiomatic, but you can also say, “As the saying goes in an Indian proverb (…)”) 🙃

I read and collect great words, and write no word on my writing paper.


I read and collect great words, and write no words on my writing paper. I read and collect great words, and write no words on my paper.

I read and collect great words, andbut I write no words on my writing paper. I read and collect great words, but I write no words on my writing paper.

I strongly suggest replacing “I write no words (…)” with “I write nothing (…)”.

No action, no mistake.


But I need to take a step to write because practice makes perfect.


But I need to take athe first step toward writeing because practice makes perfect. But I need to take the first step toward writing because practice makes perfect.

And I hope to meet more partners and friends on this platform to learn languages together.


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