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The first letter of all verbs, nouns, adjectives, and adverbs in the title is capitalized in English.

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Do you mean that you have been studying for 8 semesters, or that the course goes for 8 semesters? Additionally, the last sentence sounds more natural if it is phrased like this. If you want to use the word expectation, the correct preposition in this context is of.

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My hobby favorite hobby is listening to music and have exerciseing. My favorite hobby is listening to music and exercising.

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