What cColor aAre yYour eEyes? What Color Are Your Eyes?

Important words in titles have capital letters

My eyes are a dark- brown which areis common in Japan.I've been I am so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes, because they are beautiful colors. My eyes are dark brown which is common in Japan. I am so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes, because they are beautiful colors.

You don't need a hyphen for "dark brown" or the article "a." Make sure to include a space between sentences.

My eyes are a dark-brown which areis common in Japan. I've always been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful. My eyes are a dark-brown which is common in Japan. I've always been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.

The which refers to a 'dark-brown' colour which is singular. Added 'always' to give an idea of the amount of time otherwise it sounds a little off.

My eyes are a dark- brown, which areis common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes in the past because they are beautiful. My eyes are a dark brown, which is common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes in the past because they are beautiful.

adding in the past makes the sentence sound more natural

My eyes are a dark-brown which areis common in Japan.I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful. My eyes are dark-brown which is common in Japan.I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.

My eyes are a dark- brown, which areis common in Japan.I've I used to been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful. My eyes are dark brown, which is common in Japan. I used to be so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.

My eyes are a dark- brown which areis common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful. My eyes are dark brown which is common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.

However I'm, recently I have become proud of my eyes recently. However, recently I have become proud of my eyes.

However I'm, recently I've become proud of my eyes recently. However, recently I've become proud of my eyes.

Sounds better with 'recently' at the beginning. Changed verb to become and perfect tense. Some that happened in recent past and is now 'over'.

However, I'mve recently been proud of my eyes recently. However, I've recently been proud of my eyes.

sounds more natural

However, recently, I'm proud of my eyes recently. However, recently, I'm proud of my eyes.

However, I'm proud of my eyes recently. However, I'm proud of my eyes recently.

I think thesey are not bad. I think they are not bad.

I think thesey are non't bad. I think they aren't bad.

'they' is better 'these' sounds like you are pointing out something close to you. You can use "aren't" as a abbreviation for "are not".

I think thesey are not bad. I think they are not bad.

I think thesey are not bad. I think they are not bad.

I think thesey are not bad. I think they are not bad.

I think thesey are not bad. I think they are not bad.