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Nov. 16, 2021

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My Smart phone

These dasy, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.
I always take my phone and use anywhere and anytime.

For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone.
As this way, I can get insight and idea.

Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.
There are many videos on many topics in English.
Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again.
Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.

Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.
I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.

Like this, I use my phone for may purpose every time.

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Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.

There are many videos on many topics in English.

Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.

I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 17, 2021

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My Smart phone

Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.

There are many videos on many topics in English.

Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.

I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 17, 2021

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My Smart phone

For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone.

Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 17, 2021

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My Smartphone


These day, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.


I always take my phone and use anywhere and anytime.


I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime.

I always have my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. / I always take my phone with me and use it anywhere and anytime. I always have my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. / I always take my phone with me and use it anywhere and anytime.

I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime.

you need to say what is being used

For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think somethings with the phone.


As this way, I can get insight and idea.


As this way, I can get insight and ideas. As this way, I can get insight and ideas.

As tThis way, I can get insights and ideas. This way, I can get insights and ideas.

As this way, I can get insight and ideas. As this way, I can get insight and ideas.

Idea is singular, you either have an idea or ideas. I think in this case you mean the plural

Plus, I usually study English through Youtube.


There are many videos of many topics in English.


Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again.


Unlikely TV, I can see any contents wthat I want and it's easy to watch again. Unlike TV, I can see any contents that I want and it's easy to watch again.

Unlikely on TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watchily rewatch them again. Unlike on TV, I can see any content I want and easily rewatch them again.

Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again. Unlike TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again.

unlike means different from, unlikely means probably wont happen

Moreover, Youtube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.


Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.


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I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.


I can read news, and post pictures on (Social Media) my SNS . I can read news, and post pictures on (Social Media) my SNS .

SNS is right but if it's an acronym we don't use that much.

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Like this, I use my phone for may purpose every time.


Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time. Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time.

Like this, I use my phone for many purpose every times. I use my phone for many purposes.

Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time. Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time.

there is a spelling error may/many. If you mean many then purpose should be the plural purposes

My Smart phone


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These dasy, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.


These dasys, It is very hard to live without my smart phone. These days, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.

These dasys, Iit is very hard to live without my smart phone. These days, it is very hard to live without my smart phone.

These dasys, Iit is very hard to live without my smart phone. These days, it is very hard to live without my smart phone.

For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone.


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For example, my smartphone is like my second brain that I. I use it to write, findsearch, and think something with the phone. For example, my smartphone is like my second brain. I use it to write, search, and think.

For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I use to write, find things and think something with the phone. For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I use to write, find things and think.

your sentence is confusing, I have tried to make it clearer. Sorry my feedback on this one is not so good

Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.


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There are many videos on many topics in English.


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There are many videos on many (various) topics in English. There are many videos on many (various) topics in English.

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Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.


Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.

Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.

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