092601-a full/busy day

Today I did lots of things, though I still felt that I lack of time controled control over my time.

I had a lack of + noun

but I don't hear "time control" as a phrase, so the version in the correction is the best one, I think

In the morning, I haved a long call with my family, telling them about my life these days.

tell someone about smth

She is a friendly and well-knowledgeable person, who helped me solve my problem and alsos well as shared some tips about finding jobs with me.

when you say "share," it is assumed that she shared with you, so you don't really need to say "with me"

We ate lunch together, and I must say that turkey cream soup iwas really my cup of tea.

"my cup of tea" is not an expression I hear often. I would recommend just using an adjective like pleasant, nice, delicious, etc...
"was" because you're talking about the past

When I arrived at home, it’ was nearly three o’clock,. I fell into my bed and when I woke up, it’s five pm was 5 PM.

if you use "PM," the number is usually written in numerals instead of words

past tense again

In the evening, I had a class.

The professor is nice, but the classroom is so smelly and I felt badsick.

"I feel bad" connotes that you feel guilty that the classroom smelt bad, as if you caused the smell!

I bought a big slice of pizza from my newly favorite shop for the next day’s meal.

Then when I got home, I learntdid an online courses to assist me chasingin keeping up with the course’s pace.

you don't really "learn a course," you are learning what the course teaches you

I'm not sure what "chasing the course's pace" means

Time to sleep, thanks for your guys’ help.

I'm hesitant to click that this is right because "your guys" is informal so I'm not sure how grammar rules applies to it. But it makes sense and suits the informal tone of your journal, so I won't correct it.

Today I did a lots of things, though I still felt that I lack of timed the control over time.

In the morning, I haved a long call with my family, telling them about my life these days.

She is a friendly and well-very knowledgeable person, she helped me solve my problem, and also shared some tips with me about finding jobs with me.

We ate lunch together, and I must say that turkey cream soup is really my cup of teaof my liking.

"cup of tea" means that you excel in something. Until you made the turkey cream soup yourself and found it really easy, I don't think this phrase makes sense over here.

When I arrived at home, it’ was nearly three o’clock, I fell inton my bed and when I woke up, it’ was five pm.

In the evening, a class.

Incomplete sentence

The professor iwas nice, but the classroom iwas so smelly and I felt bad.

I bought a big slice of pizza from my newly favorite shop for the next day’s meal.

Then when I got home, I learnt aned from some online courses to assist me in chasing the course’s pace.

Time to sleep, thanks for your guys’ help.