Sept. 25, 2022
092402 - Where could I learn English in person?
Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to catch my homework due. Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed it again and again. Next time I would ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck.
Where is a good place to learn English? I watched some videos about how to behave in a bar. But I lack the courage to go to a bar alone. Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me naturally in Mandarin. I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone, I mean that studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just clone the same situation?
I have to deal with issues in English. I think I should create some situations to push myself to practice. I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.
092402 - Where couldan I learn English in person?
Today I just spent the whole day on my computer to catcfinish my homework, which was due.
Yet, I still waste lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could nodidn't get the perfect grades, so I trimmedited it again and again.
Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who only talk with me naturally in Mandarin.
I love Mandarin, it's a part of my spirit, but it's a comfort zone,. I mean that, studying in a different country gives me more chances to discover diversity, why just clonestay in the same situation?
I have to deal with my issues in English.
I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.
Good idea!
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Great idea. You could always try finding a language partner at your school that wants to learn Mandarin and would practice English with you :) Otherwise there might be some interesting clubs or societies at your school too!
092402 - Where could I learn English in person?
Today, I just spent the whole day on my computer to catchmeet my homework due date.
Make sure to set off introductory phrases with commas.
Yet, I still wasted lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed itcutting down my work again and again.
I'm a bit confused about the tenses in the original sentence. If my corrected version isn't what you meant, please let me know in the comments. :P
Next time I wouldill ask others' advice when I was stuck in a bottleneck.
If this a thought you are currently having, will is correct. If this is a thought you had earlier when you were doing your homework, you could say something like "I thought next time, I would ask ..."
Where is a good place to learn English?
I watched some videos about how to behave in a bar.
But I lack the courage to go to a bar alone.
Although I have been in the USA for over a month, I was surrounded by my classmates and friends who usually only talk with me naturallyto me in Mandarin.
I love Mandarin, --it's a part of my spirit, --but it's a comfort zone, I mean that. What I'm trying to say is: studying in a different country gives me more chances to discovencounter diversity, so why just cloneput myself in the same situation as back home?
This kind of sentence structure works fine in Mandarin, but English is a lot more restrictive when it comes to stringing clauses together. A lot of times, you will find that you need to split your sentences and add extra bits to clear up what you're talking about.
I have to deal with issues in English.
I think I should create some situations to push myself to practice.
I decided to grab every chance to speak with friendly people from now on.
I personally think "take any chance" or "grab any chance" might be slightly more common. This is also fine, though, and others may disagree, so I left it as is.
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Good work! And yeah, studying abroad is a great opportunity. I hope you are able to get a lot out of it :)
Sept. 25, 2022
Yet, I still wasted lots of time worrying about what would happen if I could not get the perfect grades, so I trimmed itcutting down my work again and again.
Your understanding is right! I tried to say that because I was overstressed about my performance, so I spent most of my time over-polishing the homework.
Sept. 25, 2022
Hello lunabunn, thanks for your supporting feedback! I love your correction style!
Sept. 25, 2022
Hello lunabunn, thanks for your supporting feedback! I love your correction style!
I'm glad to help! And thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot.
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