Sept. 22, 2022
092201- The past six months
Hello everyone, incredibly, I have not written for half a year. I experienced a lot during that time.
When I got the offer, I began to prepare for the visa. Sometimes, accidents would happen. The city lockdown blocked my visa schedule, and I have to visit another city to get my visa.
April is really stressful but fortunately, my friends encouraged me to follow my heart. And I got the visa finally at the end of May. It's a struggle time but I fight over it. I would record it in detail in future dairy (maybe, haha. I would love to write more hilarious things actually.)
I played really hard from June to July, I spent a month in a beautiful city. In July, I feel anxious because I would leave my family and nearly all my Chinese friends physically to study in another country.
In August, I took a flight to the USA. Though something makes me embarrassed, most of the journey is great. And I spent nearly a month getting through the jet lag.
In September, I made new friends from orientation and school activities. I hope I could have a friend who is also ambitious about the career and we could talk about how to build our career path. I know the first thing is to be stronger in technology hard skills and be a nice guy to others.
September is nearly finished, I would focus on my study and internship findings the next month, also I would keep learning English. I have a confusion about social activities: how to balance them with my daily life? What's your opinion?
092201- The past six months
Hello everyone, incredibly,t's hard to believe, but I have not written here for half a year.
I experienced a lot during that time.
You can also say "I went through a lot of things"
I hope I could have'll find a friend who is also ambitious about the career and, so we could talk about how to build our career path.
or "I wish I had a friend..."
September is nearly finishedover, I wouldill focus on my study and internship findings thesearching for an internship next month, also I wouldill keep learning English.
Sept. 24, 2022
yigexiaomogu, thanks for your detailed feedback, I learned a lot. I hope you have a great weekend!
092201- The past six months
Hello everyone, incredibly, I have not written for half a year.
I experienced a lot during that time.
When I got the offer, I began to prepare for the visa.
Sometimes, accidents would happen.
The city lockdown blocked my visa schedule, and I haved to visit another city to get my visa.
April iwas really stressful, but fortunately, my friends encouraged me to follow my heart.
And I finally got the visa finally at the end of May.
Not sure if this is the case for English aswell, but wouldn't recommend starting sentences with "and".
It' was a strugglehard time, but I fiought fover it.
I would record it in detail in future dairy (maybe, haha. I would love to write more hilarious things actually. )
I played really hard from June to July, I spent a month in a beautiful city.
In July, I feelt anxious because I would leave my family and nearly all my Chinese friends physically to study in another country.
In August, I took a flight to the USA.
Though some things makes me embarrassed, most of the journey is gwasg reat.
And I spent nearly a month getting through the jet lag.
In September, I made new friends from orientation and school activities.
I hope I could have a friend who is also ambitious about the career and we could talk about how to build our career path.
I know the first thing is to be stronger in technology hard skills and be a nice guy to others.
September is nearly finished, I would focus on my study and internship findings the next month, also I would keep learning English.
I have a confusquestion about social activities: how to balance them with my daily life?
What's your opinion?
Feedback
Your English is very good! Tiny mistakes here and there that can be corrected, but overall i enjoyed reading your entry~ good luck with your studies !!!!
Sept. 24, 2022
Thanks nuwa! Your feedback really made my day! have a good weekend!
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And I got the visa finally at the end of May. And I finally got the visa Not sure if this is the case for English aswell, but wouldn't recommend starting sentences with "and". |
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