Oct. 2, 2021
058 About Dancing
058 About Dancing
I don't know if you have heard of Lindy Hop, but it's basically a social dance. Kevin goes dancing three times a week and often attends dancing camps in other cities. Before the covid-19, he travels around the world to attend Lindy Hop event. Now you clearly know he's nuts about dancing. And if you haven't seen his dancing videos on the net, he's quite good at it. But Kevin tells me that there is times when you just don’t feel like dancing. That's definitely not the typical Kevin, but it happens. But when he do dance, he enjoys it very much. He is dancing the majority of the time. As far as salsa goes, he is not familiar with it.
I don't know if you have heard of Lindy Hop, but it's basically a social dance.
Kevin goes dancing three times a week and often attends dancing camps in other cities.
Before the covid-19, he travelsled around the world to attend Lindy Hop events.
And iIf you haven't seen his dancing videos on the net, he's quite good at it.
Starting a sentence with "And" is incorrect, but it doesn't really matter in casual contexts.
But Kevin tells me that there isare times when you just don’t feel like dancing.
That's definitely not the typical for Kevin, but it happens.
But when he does dance, he enjoys it very much.
He is dancing the majority of the time.
As far as salsa goes, hHe is not familiar with itsalsa dancing.
Your original sentence is correct, but this sounds better because it's more direct.
Oct. 3, 2021
Thanks very much.
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I don't know if you have heard of Lindy Hop, but it's basically a social dance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kevin goes dancing three times a week and often attends dancing camps in other cities. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before the covid-19, he travels around the world to attend Lindy Hop event. Before |
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Now you clearly know he's nuts about dancing. |
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And if you haven't seen his dancing videos on the net, he's quite good at it.
Starting a sentence with "And" is incorrect, but it doesn't really matter in casual contexts. |
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But Kevin tells me that there is times when you just don’t feel like dancing. But Kevin tells me that there |
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That's definitely not the typical Kevin, but it happens. That's definitely not |
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But when he do dance, he enjoys it very much. But when he does dance, he enjoys it very much. |
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He is dancing the majority of the time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As far as salsa goes, he is not familiar with it.
Your original sentence is correct, but this sounds better because it's more direct. |
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