Sept. 28, 2021
054 She loves the silhouette
054 She loves the silhouette
The first dress she tries is a bold statement one from the brand “Weird”. She doesn't feel really the most comfortable. It really hugs you. If you wear it when you are bloated, it really emphasizes your bottom gut. This is the kind of dress that you would love to wear when you are feeling really confident. The neckline is high, the back is low. It's a very “look at me” kind of dress. She is not sure about this dress.
Up next is a white dress, which reminds her of going to school dances. She loves the silhouette, the fabrics and the color. Her favorite part of it is the neck/bustline. It has a nice sheen to it. It wraps and ties around her waist. The tie front detail matches the trim on the bottom.
054 She loves the silhouette
The first dress she tries is a bold statement one from the brand “Weird”.
She doesn't feel really the mostfeel very comfortable in it.
Sometimes we can use "the most" like this but it feels strange here. Not really sure why.
It really hugs you.
If you wearore it when you awere bloated, it would really emphasizes your bottom gut.
This tense feels more appropriate because this sentence is quite hypothetical. We don't really say "lower gut", I think.
This is the kind of dress that you would love to wear when you are feeling really confident.
The neckline is high, the back is low.
It's a very “look at me” kind of dress.
She is not sure about this dress.
Up next is a white dress, which reminds her of going to school dances.
She loves the silhouette, the fabrics and the color.
"fabrics" if it's a dress with many distinct types of fabric - like maybe the top is silk and the skirt is velvet or something. If it's all very similar you'd just say "she loves the fabric".
Her favorite part of it is the neck/bustline.
Neckline?
It has a nice sheen to it.
It wraps and ties around her waist.
The tie front detail matches the trim onat the bottom.
I think "on the bottom" sounds like it's on the bottom surface - like a sticker on the bottom of a mug, the surface that the mug sits on when you put it on a table. Dresses don't really have a surface like that.
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054 She loves the silhouette This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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054 She loves the silhouette |
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The first dress she tries is a bold statement one from the brand “Weird”. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She doesn't feel really the most comfortable. She doesn't Sometimes we can use "the most" like this but it feels strange here. Not really sure why. |
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It really hugs you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you wear it when you are bloated, it really emphasizes your bottom gut. If you w This tense feels more appropriate because this sentence is quite hypothetical. We don't really say "lower gut", I think. |
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This is the kind of dress that you would love to wear when you are feeling really confident. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The neckline is high, the back is low. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a very “look at me” kind of dress. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She is not sure about this dress. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Up next is a white dress, which reminds her of going to school dances. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She loves the silhouette, the fabrics and the color. She loves the silhouette, the fabrics and the color. "fabrics" if it's a dress with many distinct types of fabric - like maybe the top is silk and the skirt is velvet or something. If it's all very similar you'd just say "she loves the fabric". |
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Her favorite part of it is the neck/bustline. Her favorite part of it is the neck/bustline. Neckline? |
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It has a nice sheen to it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It wraps and ties around her waist. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The tie front detail matches the trim on the bottom. The tie front detail matches the trim I think "on the bottom" sounds like it's on the bottom surface - like a sticker on the bottom of a mug, the surface that the mug sits on when you put it on a table. Dresses don't really have a surface like that. |
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