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Statement:

In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better?

Essay:

With the massive use of technology, people's life had changed drastically, as has the labor market. Unlike the past when people spend their entire career working for one company, nowadays, workers move from one job to another in a short period of time. Although it is a drawback for some people, I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages.

For starters, not having a fixed job allows people to have more choices in life and discover hidden talents. That happened to me when I quit my job as a journalist. I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequently I decided to developed new skills to get that position. That helped me to get a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I have.

Moreover, being able to adapt to different jobs is helpful in a time when technology is eliminating manual and repetitive jobs. With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center field or manual jobs are being displacing. That force people to be more flexible and develop skills that are more value in the job market, and in this way avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

To sum up, there are many advantages of moving from one job to another: it helps people to have more options in life with the development of new skills, and it makes it easier to deal with the impact of technology in the labor market.

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04/05 Another opinion essay :) Thank you

Statement:


In the past, most people spen
dt their entire careers working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?

Which do you think is better?

Essay:


With
the massive use ofrapid leaps in technology, people's lifeves hadve changed drastically, as has the labor market.

Or "Rapid leaps in technology have drastically changed people's lives as well as the labor market."

Unlike the past, when people spendt their entire careers working for one company, nowadays, workersit is more common for employees to move from one job to another within a short period of time.

Although some may see it ias a drawback for some people, I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages.

For starters, not having a fixed job allows people to have more choices in life and discover hidden talents.

That happened to me when I quit my job as a journalist.

I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequentlyindustry, so I decided to developed new skills to get that positionin that field.

That helped me to getachieve a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I haved.

Moreover, being able to adapt to different jobnew fields is helpful in a time when technology is eliminating manual and, repetitive jobs.

Or: "being able to acquire new skills"

With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center fields or manual jobs are being displacingautomated.

Thatis forces people to be more flexible and develop skills that arhave more value in the job market, and in this wayhelps them avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

ToIn sum up, there are many advantages of moving from one job to another: it helpgives people to have more options in life wmore opportunithy theo development of new skills, and it makes it easier to deal with the impact of technology in the labor market.

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Xtren070

May 5, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections!

Statement:


In the past, most people spen
dt their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays tend to move from one job to another.

Essay:


With the massive use of technology, people's life ha
ds changed drastically, as has the labor market.

Unlike the past when people spendt their entire career working for one company, nowadays, workers move from one job to another in a shorter period of time.

I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequently I decided to developed new skills to get that position.

That helped me to get a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I haved.

With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center field or manual jobs are being displacinged.

That forces people to be more flexible and develop skills that are more valuable in the job market, and in this way avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

Xtren070's avatar
Xtren070

May 5, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections!

04/05 Another opinion essay :) Thank you

Statement: In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another.

Statement:


In the past, most people spen
dt their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays tend to move from one job to another.

Statement:


In the past, most people spen
dt their entire careers working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?

Which do you think is better?

Essay: With the massive use of technology, people's life had changed drastically, as has the labor market.

Essay:


With the massive use of technology, people's life ha
ds changed drastically, as has the labor market.

Essay:


With
the massive use ofrapid leaps in technology, people's lifeves hadve changed drastically, as has the labor market.

Unlike the past when people spend their entire career working for one company, nowadays, workers move from one job to another in a short period of time.

Unlike the past when people spendt their entire career working for one company, nowadays, workers move from one job to another in a shorter period of time.

Unlike the past, when people spendt their entire careers working for one company, nowadays, workersit is more common for employees to move from one job to another within a short period of time.

Although it is a drawback for some people, I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages.

Although some may see it ias a drawback for some people, I believe that it has more advantages than disadvantages.

For starters, not having a fixed job allows people to have more choices in life and discover hidden talents.

That happened to me when I quit my job as a journalist.

I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequently I decided to developed new skills to get that position.

I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequentlyindustry, so I decided to developed new skills to get that positionin that field.

I found that marketing was a booming career, and consequently I decided to developed new skills to get that position.

That helped me to get a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I have.

That helped me to getachieve a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I haved.

That helped me to get a higher income job in a more creative field, with new skills that I did not know that I haved.

Moreover, being able to adapt to different jobs is helpful in a time when technology is eliminating manual and repetitive jobs.

Moreover, being able to adapt to different jobnew fields is helpful in a time when technology is eliminating manual and, repetitive jobs.

With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center field or manual jobs are being displacing.

With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center fields or manual jobs are being displacingautomated.

With the development of tools such as the artificial intelligence, jobs in the call center field or manual jobs are being displacinged.

That force people to be more flexible and develop skills that are more value in the job market, and in this way avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

Thatis forces people to be more flexible and develop skills that arhave more value in the job market, and in this wayhelps them avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

That forces people to be more flexible and develop skills that are more valuable in the job market, and in this way avoiding unemployment and financial problems.

To sum up, there are many advantages of moving from one job to another: it helps people to have more options in life with the development of new skills, and it makes it easier to deal with the impact of technology in the labor market.

ToIn sum up, there are many advantages of moving from one job to another: it helpgives people to have more options in life wmore opportunithy theo development of new skills, and it makes it easier to deal with the impact of technology in the labor market.

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