March 10, 2022
031001-Accepted My Offer
I accepted an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up. I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hand was shaking. I wondered whether I would be accepted or not. Suddenly, a big Red Cross popped up, and I was shocked. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found the university accepted me, and this red cross is a sign to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa. I burst out screaming and laughing.OMG! New York, I come!
I acceptWhen I woke up, I received an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up.
I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hand was shaking.
I wondered whether I would be accepted or not.
Suddenly, a big Rred CrossX popped up, and I was shocked.
I'm guessing the cross is an X?
However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university accepted me, and this red cross is a signX is to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa.
I burst out screaming and laughing. OMG!
New York, here I come!
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恭喜！ 欢迎来到纽约~
I acceptreceived an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up.
I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hands wasere shaking.
Usually we talk about both hands shaking at the same time
However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university has accepted me, and that this red cross iwas a sign to remind me that I needed to update some documents to get an I-20 visa.
You wrote the beginning of the sentence in the past tense, and the end in the present.
New York, here I come!
or "New York, I'm coming!"
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Congratulations!
March 12, 2022
However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university has accepted me, and that this red cross iwas a sign to remind me that I needed to update some documents to get an I-20 visa.
Thanks! I would pay more attention on that.
March 12, 2022
Thanks! Your suggestion is valuable to me！
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031001-Accepted My Offer |
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I accepted an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up. I
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I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hand was shaking. I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hands w Usually we talk about both hands shaking at the same time This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wondered whether I would be accepted or not. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Suddenly, a big Red Cross popped up, and I was shocked. Suddenly, a big I'm guessing the cross is an X? |
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However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found the university accepted me, and this red cross is a sign to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university has accepted me, and that this red cross You wrote the beginning of the sentence in the past tense, and the end in the present. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university accepted me, and this red |
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I burst out screaming and laughing.OMG! I burst out screaming and laughing. OMG! |
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New York, I come! New York, here I come! or "New York, I'm coming!" New York, here I come! |
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