Feb. 27, 2022
022701 - An Emergency
Yesterday I reviewed my writing these days and did not write new journals. Today I opened this web joyfully and clicked the button "write" . Suddenly, an alarm message popped. I was shocked, soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%. I was relieved.
The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, that no recent article was recommended to me. Happily, today I got three new ones to correct. I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha. Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication.
022701 - An Emergency
Yesterday I reviewed my recent writing these days and did not write new journals.
This sounds a bit more natural.
Today I opened this website joyfully and clicked the button "write" button.
Wording, word order.
Suddenly, an alarm message popped up.
I was shocked, but soon I calmed down and found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correctiong rate of 50%.
I was relieved.
The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, such as yesterday, thatwhen no recent article was recommended to me.
Happily, today I got three new ones to correct.
I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha.
Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it i. It was an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives bythrough communication.
I would break this sentence into two for improved readability.
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Good job! I'll try and do some Chinese journals, haha.
Feb. 28, 2022
Thanks! Looking forward to your writing =)
022701 - An Emergency
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First sentence comes straight from @lovemixlive:
Yesterday I reviewed my (recent journal entries, but I did not write any new entries.)
Today I opened this web(site with joy), and clicked the button "write"(.) --> The other reviewers think "I opened this website joyfully" sounds a bit strange - but in reality, there's nothing wrong with it! It's a mouthful haha! But I like it and you should feel confident! Perfectly valid examples, "I danced joyfully", "I laughed joyfully", "I ran through the streets joyfully".
Suddenly, an alarm message popped (up). I was shocked, (but) soon I calmed down(. I) found it reminded me to correct more journals (in order) to maintain my correcting rate of 50%. I was relieved. --> I often trip up with "in order to" because it is a bit unwieldy. But used very carefully, it can work well...
The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals(... For example,) yesterday (no new) article(s) (were) recommended to me.
Happily, today I got three new (entries) to correct. --> Again, I'd say there is nothing wrong with "Happily," at the start of this sentence. You could say "Luckily," or "Fortunately," but it's perfectly fine.
I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha. Today I fixed an article about (a) "Paper Bag Test", and (I) learned more about racism in American history(.) (Writing these journal corrections is) an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives(.)
Feb. 27, 2022
I hope that's easy to read! I was trying to avoid giving you corrections, and unbalancing your ratio!
Feb. 28, 2022
Thanks, it's clear! I appreciate you're so sweet!! But I do hope to see your corrections in colorful shading again next time because it is an enjoyment to compare my original content with your jolly good revision. ;)
Feb. 28, 2022
Hahaha! Splendid! I'll just pop over to your new journal entry then, and get cracking! ㅎㅎㅎ!!! (Also first time laughing in hangul here :D)
Yesterday I reviewed my writing these days andrecent journal entries, but I did not write new journalany new entries.
Today, I opened this website and joyfully and clicked the button "write" .
Suddenly, an alarmert message popped up.
I was shocked, soobut then I calmed down and founwhen I realized it was remindeding me to correct more journals to maintain my correctiong rate of 50%.
I wasWhat a relieved.f!
The only problem is that there are usually very few new Chinese journals, such as entries. For example, yesterday, that no recent article was recommended to meere were no new entries recommended for correction.
HappiFortunately, today I gotthere were three new ones to correct.
I secretly hope the Chinese learners write more, haha.
Today I fixcorrected an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication. It was an great experience to read about other people's perspectives.
Feb. 28, 2022
Thanks, I like the expression "What a relief!" it is so accurate!
Yesterday, I reviewed my writing these days and did not write. Lately, I haven't written any new journal entries.
let me know if this is what you mean
Today, I opened this web joyfulsite excitedly and clicked the button "write" .
Suddenly, an alarm message popped up.
popped up
(phrasal verb - to appear)
I was shocked, s. Soon I calmed down and. I found it reminded me to correct more journals to maintain my correcting rate of 50%.
The only problem is that there are usually few new Chinese journals, s. Such as yesterday, that no recent articles wasere recommended to me.
HappLuckily, today I got three new ones to correct.
Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and i. It is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication.
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Good work
Some new words I wrote which fit better with the sentence
A new phrasal verb
Also, made some sentences shorter
You have many good ideas
But too many ideas in one sentence makes it hard to read
Good work!
=)
Feb. 27, 2022
Yesterday, I reviewed my writing these days and did not write. Lately, I haven't written any new journal entries.
I want to express that "I didn't write just yesterday because I was reviewing my recent journals. "
Feb. 27, 2022
Thanks! Your advice is valuable! I would try to break up my sentences. Let one sentence just express one idea =)
Feb. 27, 2022
want to express that "I didn't write just yesterday because I was reviewing my recent journals. "
Yesterday was the only day I didn't write because I was reviewing my recent journals
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Today I opened this web joyfully and clicked the button "write" . Today, I opened this web Today, I opened this website and joyfully Today I opened this website joyfully and clicked the Wording, word order. |
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Happily, today I got three new ones to correct.
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I secretly hope Chinese learners write more haha. I secretly hope the Chinese learners write more, haha. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history, and it is an excellent experience to understand others' perspectives by communication. Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history Today I Today I fixed an article about "Paper Bag Test", and learned more about racism in American history I would break this sentence into two for improved readability. |
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