Feb. 25, 2022
Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician. Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.
I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes. It is an honest and beautiful song. Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers. Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.
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'Hounding' is a great word to use here, meaning that he is constantly being followed and bothered doggedly.
I like his signature song that is called, My Skateboard Shoes.
It is an honest and beautiful song.
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.
I'm not quite sure what you mean here.
Sadly, I think his musical talent is less surmore questionable, so I don't know how far he could goan get in his musical career.
I hope I interpreted this properly, might have not given that the previous sentence was unclear. Let me know if I misinterpreted.
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Great job, keep it up!
022502-An impressive person
Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or /musician.
I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes.
It is an honest and beautiful song.
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to becomecredits should be given to the producerstion team.
Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sureuncertain now, so I don't know how far he could go.
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to becomethe credit should go to the producers.
Using "producers" implies a type of music that is heavily edited in the studio. Otherwise, it could be "other musicians."
022502-An impressive person
Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or musician.
I agree with sikboy. I often use a slash when I’m referring to something I’m not 100% sure about - or a thing that has multiple meanings, and I want to convey that.
Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposurexcessive exposure of his personal life, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.
Alternative suggestion.
I like his signature song that is called, My Skateboard Shoes.
This is another short and clear alternative.
It is an honest and beautiful song.
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become toly everything else in his music is created by the producerstion team.
I understood your original sentence but here’s yet another phrasing 👍
Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sureremains to be proven, so I don't know how far he could gohis career will develop.
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I totally understood everything you originally wrote so no worries! 🙃✌️
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I like his signature song, that is calitled "My Skateboard Shoes".
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.
I don't understand this.
Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could gogoing to disappear (after this incident), so I don't know what will happen after this.
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Some parts are a little unclear.
Today I read an article about a Chinese singer or /musician.
if you are unsure if the person is a singer or musician you can write singer/musician.
Media crowded him, then after dramatic exposure, he had mental issues and went to the hospital.
what do you mean by "dramatic exposure"?
I like his signature song that is called My Skateboard Shoes.
Except for the lyrics written by this singer, most honors need to become to the producers.
most honors need to become to the producers
what do you mean here?
Sadly, I think his musical talent is less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.
less sure, so I don't know how far he could go.
what do you mean here?
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