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tana_gao

Feb. 23, 2022

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022301-The first day to start writing English Diary

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit. As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing a Chinese diary for over ten years. Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world buzzed with messages. However, I have never tried English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfect is. In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work. Little ashamed, but when professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.

As an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better). I read and collect great words, and write no word on my writing paper. No action, no mistake.

But I need to take a step to write because practice makes perfect. And I hope to meet more partners and friends on this platform to learn languages together.

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022301-The My first day to start writing an English Diary

Just another way to phrase this :-)

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit.

Your sentence is great! I could have typed exactly the same thing!

You could replace “that seems like” with “that’s a bit like”, or “that’s similar to”, or even “that’s equivalent to”!

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world, buzzeding with messages.

However, I have never tried to write an English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstructionproblem, but P“perfection” is.

Obstruction is a bit formal.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and w. When he prepared, he said to himself: , “I want to create a classic work.

Nothing wrong with anything you typed! I just suggest short sentences when possible :)

Little ashamed, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.

Maybe “the same idea as Spongebob”? 👍 (I have also had this problem with perfectionism btw 😂)

As expressed in an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

Haha! 👍
(This is very idiomatic, but you can also say, “As the saying goes in an Indian proverb (…)”) 🙃

I read and collect great words, andbut I write no words on my writing paper.

I strongly suggest replacing “I write no words (…)” with “I write nothing (…)”.

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I loved this! Thanks for sharing, it’s my first day on this website and first set of corrections! 🥳

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tana_gao

Feb. 23, 2022

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thanks very much! And your stylistic suggestions are useful and accurate! Hope we can overcome perfectionism together haha!

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jogeumman

Feb. 23, 2022

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Haha thanks! We can do this! I’m working through level 1 of Talk To Me In Korean, but I’m going to keep trying to help English learners here anyway!

I’ve tried and failed at learning languages many times in the past - not this time though! Will follow you, so please post more sentences asap! 👍

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tana_gao

Feb. 23, 2022

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I have faith in you! =)

022301-The f First day to start writing an English Diary

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seemis like Reddit.

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world that is buzzeding with text messages.

However, I have never tried writing an English daiary before.

Laziness is not the obstructionacle, but Pperfectionism is.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.

Actually in the English version he says "I am about to write the greatest essay of all time" 😉

Little ashamedIt's a little embarrassing, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have theis same idea.

As anLike this Indian proverb that I learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do it, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

I read and collect great words, and write no words on my writing paper.

But I need to take athe first step toward writeing because practice makes perfect.

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欢迎你来到这里!祝你英语学习顺利!

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tana_gao

Feb. 23, 2022

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wow, really thanks! The phrases and words you picked are accurate and elegent, I appreciate it!

022301-The first day to start writing in English Diary

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems likesimilar to Reddit.

As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing in a Chinese diary for over ten years.

However, I have never tried it with an English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfection is.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.

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nice one

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tana_gao

Feb. 23, 2022

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Thanks! I learned a lot from your correction; missing prepositions is my bad habit, I would pay more attention to that.

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sikboy

Feb. 23, 2022

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You are welcome. =)

022301-The first day to start writing English Diary


022301-The first day to start writing in English Diary

022301-The f First day to start writing an English Diary

022301-The My first day to start writing an English Diary

Just another way to phrase this :-)

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit.


Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems likesimilar to Reddit.

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seemis like Reddit.

Today is my first day on this site, and I was recommended by a Chinese website that seems like Reddit.

Your sentence is great! I could have typed exactly the same thing! You could replace “that seems like” with “that’s a bit like”, or “that’s similar to”, or even “that’s equivalent to”!

As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing a Chinese diary for over ten years.


As a Chinese native speaker, I have kept a habit of writing in a Chinese diary for over ten years.

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world buzzed with messages.


Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world that is buzzeding with text messages.

Writing is a sanctuary for me in the modern world, buzzeding with messages.

However, I have never tried English dairy before.


However, I have never tried it with an English dairy before.

However, I have never tried writing an English daiary before.

However, I have never tried to write an English dairy before.

Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfect is.


Laziness is not the obstruction, but Perfection is.

Laziness is not the obstructionacle, but Pperfectionism is.

Laziness is not the obstructionproblem, but P“perfection” is.

Obstruction is a bit formal.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.


In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and when he prepared, he said to himself: I want to create a classic work.

Actually in the English version he says "I am about to write the greatest essay of all time" 😉

In SpongeBob SquarePants, SpongeBob was asked to write an essay of 800 words, and w. When he prepared, he said to himself: , “I want to create a classic work.

Nothing wrong with anything you typed! I just suggest short sentences when possible :)

Little ashamed, but when professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.


Little ashamedIt's a little embarrassing, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have theis same idea.

Little ashamed, but when my professors asked me to write in English, I usually have the same idea.

Maybe “the same idea as Spongebob”? 👍 (I have also had this problem with perfectionism btw 😂)

As an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).


As anLike this Indian proverb that I learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do it, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

As expressed in an Indian proverb learned from my friend, "Kro to acha, an kro to arbhi acha" (if you do, it's good, if you don't do it, it's even better).

Haha! 👍 (This is very idiomatic, but you can also say, “As the saying goes in an Indian proverb (…)”) 🙃

I read and collect great words, and write no word on my writing paper.


I read and collect great words, and write no words on my writing paper.

I read and collect great words, andbut I write no words on my writing paper.

I strongly suggest replacing “I write no words (…)” with “I write nothing (…)”.

No action, no mistake.


But I need to take a step to write because practice makes perfect.


But I need to take athe first step toward writeing because practice makes perfect.

And I hope to meet more partners and friends on this platform to learn languages together.


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