The Fifth Lunar New Year's Day Five The Fifth Lunar New Year's Day

Lunar New Year's: Day Five Lunar New Year: Day Five

I feel like putting the colon : makes the title look neater.

Lunar New Year's: Day Five Lunar New Year: Day Five

Looks cleaner!

Day Five of Lunar New Year's Day Five Day Five of Lunar New Year

More natural sounding this way

It's the fifth day of Lunar New Year today,; the holiday is already halfway over. It's the fifth day of Lunar New Year today; the holiday is already halfway over.

A semicolon ; is better for this. It's in between a comma and full stop.

It's the fifth day of Lunar New Year today, so the holiday is already halfway over. It's the fifth day of Lunar New Year today so the holiday is already halfway over.

I would make this a subordinate clause here because it makes the sentence flow better- not wrong though!

This holiday is very fulfilling tofor me. This holiday is very fulfilling for me.

TI find this holiday is very fulfilling to me. I find this holiday very fulfilling.

This holidayLunar New Year is very fulfilling to me. Lunar New Year is very fulfilling to me.

Stating "This holiday" is a unclear and because the sentence is by itself, it makes more sense to add a subject.

This holiday is very fulfilling tofor me. This holiday is very fulfilling for me.

Both are correct, but “for me” is my preference, choose whichever you prefer!

My family went to my hometown to have the New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings and their kids. My family went to my hometown to have the New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings and their kids.

My family went to my hometown to have the New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings and their kids. My family went to my hometown to have New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings and their kids.

My family went to my hometown to have thea New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings, and their kids. My family went to my hometown to have a New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings, and their kids.

Dinner is spelling incorrectly, and always put a comma before "and" if it's in a list and separating subjects!

My familyparents, my siblings, and their kids all went to myour hometown to have the New Year's Eve dinner with my parents, my siblings and their kidsas a family. My parents, my siblings, and their kids all went to our hometown to have New Year's Eve dinner as a family.

our hometown (since it is the hometown of your whole family), then changed the sentence order to make it more clear. If you say family first, then later say who your family is, it feels redundant. But if you say who first, then say “as a family”, this emphasizes the feeling of family.

After dinner, we went to sisang, chatted and laughed. After dinner, we sang, chatted and laughed.

After dinner, we went to sing, chattedstarted to sing. We also chatted amongst ourselves and laughed. After dinner, we started to sing. We also chatted amongst ourselves and laughed.

After dinner, we went to sisung, chatted and laughed. After dinner we sung, chatted and laughed.

Make them all the same tense/ format.

After dinner, we went to sisang, chatted, and laughed. After dinner, we sang, chatted, and laughed.

past tense

The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives,. sSome of them hadve changed a lot compared toover the years ago. The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives. Some of them have changed a lot over the years.

This isn't grammatically incorrect, it just sounds a little unnatural in English. You could also say, "Some of them have changed a lot since our childhood."

The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives, ; some of them had changed a lot compared to years ago. The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives; some of them had changed a lot compared to years ago.

A semi colon is better than a comma after the word "relatives"

The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives, some of them had changed a lot compared to years ago. The next day, my brother and I visited our relatives, some of them had changed a lot compared to years ago.

Then my wife and I came back home, leftaving my daughter atin my hometown, because she liked tos playing with the kids there. Then my wife and I came back home, leaving my daughter in my hometown because she likes playing with the kids there.

ThenLater, my wife and I came back home and left my daughter at my hometown, because she liked to playing with the kids there. Later, my wife and I came back home and left my daughter at my hometown, because she liked playing with the kids there.

ThenAfterwards, my wife and I came back home and left my daughter at my hometown, because she likeds to play with the kids there. Afterwards, my wife and I came back home and left my daughter at my hometown because she likes to play with the kids there.

Then my wife and I came back home, but we left myour daughter at my hometown, because she likeds to play with the kids there. Then my wife and I came back home, but we left our daughter at my hometown, because she likes to play with the kids there.

our daughter (assuming your daughter is also your wife’s child), she likes, not liked, because here you are stating a fact, so you should use present tense

It was a little cold there, but it was and very crowded. It was a little cold there and very crowded.

It was a little cold there, butand it was very crowded. It was a little cold there, and it was very crowded.

conjunction correction

There were many Sspring Ffestive activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances and blessing garden events, etc. There were many spring festive activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances and blessing garden events, etc.

There were many Spring Festiveal activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances and blessing garden events, etc. There were many Spring Festival activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances and blessing garden events, etc.

There were many Spring Festive activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances, and blessing garden events, etc. There were many Spring Festive activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances, and blessing garden events.

There were many Spring Festiveal activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances and, blessing garden events, etc. There were many Spring Festival activities, such as lion dances, iron flower performances, blessing garden events, etc.

If you say “etc.” you don’t need “and”

ExceptAs well as these activities, we had lots of delicious food too. As well as these activities, we had lots of delicious food.

ExceptAs well as these activities, we had lots of delicious food too. As well as these activities, we had lots of delicious food too.

Except these activities, wWe had lots of delicious food too. We had lots of delicious food too.

ExceptIn addition to these activities, we had lots of delicious food too. In addition to these activities, we had lots of delicious food too.

除了…意外，..都.. = except, other than, not including 除了…意外，..也/还.. = in addition

Now I'm at home and planning to go to my hometown andto pick up my daughter. Now I'm at home and planning to go to my hometown to pick up my daughter.

Now I'm at home and, planning to go to my hometown and pick up my daughter. Now I'm at home, planning to go to my hometown and pick up my daughter.

Now I'm atback home and planning to go to my hometown and pick up my daughter. Now I'm back home and planning to go to my hometown and pick up my daughter.

“back” emphasizes you have returned