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Aug. 22, 2021

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017 A Ridiculous Argument

017 A Ridiculous Argument
The man at the window drew an analogy between marriage and war. He said there were some parallels between how a marriage started and how a war ended. He also putted forward the argument that he could cook but he pretended that he could’t so that his wife got the opportunity to take care of him. She should be thankful because to serve him was what she wanted and enjoyed. Everyone at the table was shocked by his argument. In my opinion, she did love him and enjoyed taking care for him, but as a taker he took what he got for granted. Love means taking care of each other. Taking care not only means sweet words and nice gifts, but also cooking, accompanying, and housework.

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017 A Ridiculous Argument

017 A Ridiculous Argument

The man at the window drew an analogy between marriage and war.

He said there were some parallels between how a marriage started and how a war ended.

He also putted forwardth the argument that he could cook but he pretended that he couldn’t so that his wife got the opportunity to take care of him.

She should be thankful because to serveing him was what she wanted and enjoyed.

Everyone at the table was shocked by his argument.

In my opinion, she did love him and enjoyed taking care ofor him, but as a takerthe person receiving that he took what he got for granted.

There are many other ways to say this, like "the person on the receiving end," "the person being taken care of," and so on.

Love means taking care of each other.

Taking carehat not only means sweet words and nice gifts, but also cooking, ackeeping each other companying, and doing housework.

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michael_sun

Aug. 26, 2021

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Thanks a lot.

017 A Ridiculous Argument


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017 A Ridiculous Argument


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The man at the window drew an analogy between marriage and war.


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He said there were some parallels between how a marriage started and how a war ended.


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He also putted forward the argument that he could cook but he pretended that he could’t so that his wife got the opportunity to take care of him.


He also putted forwardth the argument that he could cook but he pretended that he couldn’t so that his wife got the opportunity to take care of him.

She should be thankful because to serve him was what she wanted and enjoyed.


She should be thankful because to serveing him was what she wanted and enjoyed.

Everyone at the table was shocked by his argument.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my opinion, she did love him and enjoyed taking care for him, but as a taker he took what he got for granted.


In my opinion, she did love him and enjoyed taking care ofor him, but as a takerthe person receiving that he took what he got for granted.

There are many other ways to say this, like "the person on the receiving end," "the person being taken care of," and so on.

Love means taking care of each other.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Taking care not only means sweet words and nice gifts, but also cooking, accompanying, and housework.


Taking carehat not only means sweet words and nice gifts, but also cooking, ackeeping each other companying, and doing housework.

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