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01/07 Marriage: opinion essay :)

Marriage is a very important event for everyone's life because it represents a long term commitment with another person. Many people think that the legal age at which individuals should marry is at least 21 years due to its legal and social consequences. The following are some reasons why I find this to be true.

To begin with, when people are 21 years old, they have the maturity and emotional readiness to start a long term commitment. At this age, people are more aware of the legal and social consequences that imply to get married. Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasons that will have a long term effect in the married couple. It also helps to reduce cases of manipulation or abuse between the couple because of the expected maturity at this age.

Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies that decision and reduce divorces. Waiting until that age allows people to better understand the responsibilities that come along with marriage. That could help lower the number of marriage endings, which are often caused by incompatibility or unrealistic expectations of a marital union. That is what happened with my ant, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage.

In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years as the legal age to get married because the maturity and emotional readiness that people have at that age, which also can improve people's long-term commitment to that.

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01/07 Marriage: opinion essay :)

Marriage is a very important event forin everyone's life because it represents a long term commitment with another person.

Many people think that the legal age at which individuals should marry is at least 21 years due to its legal and social consequences.

The following are some reasons why I find this to be true.

To begin with, when people are 21 years old, they have the maturity and emotional readiness to start a long term commitment.

At this age, people are more aware of the legal and social consequences that imply to get marriedgetting married implies.

Also 'that marriage implies' is valid

Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasons that will have a long term effect ion the married couple.

It also helps to reduce cases of manipulation or abuse between the couple because of the expected maturity at this age.

Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies thatthe decision implies and reduce divorces.

Waiting until that age allows people to better understand the responsibilities that come along with marriage.

That could help lower the number of marriage endings, which are often caused by incompatibility or unrealistic expectations of a marital union.

That is what happened with my aunt, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage requires.

I think you meant aunt, although a wedding between ants sounds quite humorous

In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years as the legal age to get married because of the maturity and emotional readiness that people have at that age, which also can improve people's long-term commitment to thait.

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01/07 Marriage: an opinion essay :)

Marriage is a very important event for everyone's lifemany people, because it represents a long -term commitment withto another person.

Many people think that the legal age at which individuals should marry isbe allowed to marry should be at least 21 years of age, due to its legal and social consequences.

The following lines are some reasons why I find this to be trueagree with this.

To begin with, when people are 21 years old, they have the maturityare mature enough and emotionally readinesssponsible to start a long term commitment.

At this age, people are more aware of the potential legal and social consequences that imply to getcome with getting married.

Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasonthings that will have a long -term effect ion thea married couple.

It also helps to reduce cases of manipulation or abuse between the couple because of the expected maturity at this age.

This makes sense, and is not incorrect, however to me it sounds a little strange. (I can't think of how to fix it though)

Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies that decision and reduce divorces.

Could you post this in your native language? I don't quite understand

Waiting until that age allows people to better understand the responsibilities that come along with marriage.

That could help lower the number of marriage endingdivorces, which are often caused by incompatibility or unrealistic expectations of how a marital union should be.

If your country has divorces, I would recommend using that word here

That is what happened with my aunt, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage requires.

In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years of age as the legal age to get married, because the maturity and emotional readinessintelligence that people have at that age, whichcan also canhelp to improve people'sa long-term commitment to thatsomething like marriage.

01/07 Marriage: opinion essay :)


01/07 Marriage: an opinion essay :)

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Marriage is a very important event for everyone's life because it represents a long term commitment with another person.


Marriage is a very important event for everyone's lifemany people, because it represents a long -term commitment withto another person.

Marriage is a very important event forin everyone's life because it represents a long term commitment with another person.

The following are some reasons why I find this to be true.


The following lines are some reasons why I find this to be trueagree with this.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Many people think that the legal age at which individuals should marry is at least 21 years due to its legal and social consequences.


Many people think that the legal age at which individuals should marry isbe allowed to marry should be at least 21 years of age, due to its legal and social consequences.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To begin with, when people are 21 years old, they have the maturity and emotional readiness to start a long term commitment.


To begin with, when people are 21 years old, they have the maturityare mature enough and emotionally readinesssponsible to start a long term commitment.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At this age, people are more aware of the legal and social consequences that imply to get married.


At this age, people are more aware of the potential legal and social consequences that imply to getcome with getting married.

At this age, people are more aware of the legal and social consequences that imply to get marriedgetting married implies.

Also 'that marriage implies' is valid

Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasons that will have a long term effect in the married couple.


Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasonthings that will have a long -term effect ion thea married couple.

Asset sharing, surname changes, or starting a family are some of the reasons that will have a long term effect ion the married couple.

It also helps to reduce cases of manipulation or abuse between the couple because of the expected maturity at this age.


It also helps to reduce cases of manipulation or abuse between the couple because of the expected maturity at this age.

This makes sense, and is not incorrect, however to me it sounds a little strange. (I can't think of how to fix it though)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies that decision and reduce divorces.


Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies that decision and reduce divorces.

Could you post this in your native language? I don't quite understand

Furthermore, establishing this legal age to get married can improve the long-term commitment that implies thatthe decision implies and reduce divorces.

Waiting until that age allows people to better understand the responsibilities that come along with marriage.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That could help lower the number of marriage endings, which are often caused by incompatibility or unrealistic expectations of a marital union.


That could help lower the number of marriage endingdivorces, which are often caused by incompatibility or unrealistic expectations of how a marital union should be.

If your country has divorces, I would recommend using that word here

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is what happened with my ant, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage.


That is what happened with my aunt, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage requires.

That is what happened with my aunt, who decided to get married at a very young age without having a clear understanding of what require a good marriage requires.

I think you meant aunt, although a wedding between ants sounds quite humorous

In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years as the legal age to get married because the maturity and emotional readiness that people have at that age, which also can improve people's long-term commitment to that.


In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years of age as the legal age to get married, because the maturity and emotional readinessintelligence that people have at that age, whichcan also canhelp to improve people'sa long-term commitment to thatsomething like marriage.

In conclusion, I agree with setting 21 years as the legal age to get married because of the maturity and emotional readiness that people have at that age, which also can improve people's long-term commitment to thait.

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