Oct. 22, 2025
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Hello guys my name is Rasul,and i have dream.
it so biggest dream.
i want visit in Malasia,and USA
I want new friend and new jobs ;)
Bye Bye
Это мое первая сообщение на англ,и тут кажется очень много ошибок.
Пожалуйста не судите строго
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Hello guys my name is Rasul, and iI have a dream.
it so biggestIt’s a very big dream.
iI want to visit in Malaysia, and USA
I want new friends and a new jobs ;)
Bye Bye
iI want to visit in Malaysia, and the USA.
I want to meet new friends and to experience new jobs. ;)
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I mostly agree with the other user's suggested corrections. One thing I'd like to point out that hasn't already been pointed out is "parallelism": when you are talking about two or more things in a sentence, you want to make sure things like your verb tenses/conjugations agree.
Hello, guys m. My name is Rasul, and iI have a dream.
it soIt's my biggest dream.
You can't use "so" to modify "dream," but this would work
iI want to visit in Malaysia, and the USA.
"I" is always capitalized
I want new friends and to experience new jobs. ;)
Generally, you'd speak about making new friends in the plural sense. However, saying you want new JOBS is a bit unusual in the plural sense, so I would modify it like this to highlight that it's part of the new experiences you want to have
Bye Bbye.
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Great job
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it so biggest dream.
You can't use "so" to modify "dream," but this would work
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i want visit in Malasia,and USA
"I" is always capitalized
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I want new friend and new jobs ;) I want new friends and to experience new jobs. ;) Generally, you'd speak about making new friends in the plural sense. However, saying you want new JOBS is a bit unusual in the plural sense, so I would modify it like this to highlight that it's part of the new experiences you want to have I want to meet new friends and to experience new jobs. ;) I want new friends and a new job |
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