April 5, 2025
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Today I want to write about all women.
Women are people who are ready to do anything for the sake of their family. In me country, there are many women who give up their careers after getting married or having a child. I think this is a great sacrifice. They want to grow their careers, develop their skills every day, but in order to raise a child, they give all this up.
When a woman stays at home 24/7, she always needs to be support, help, kind words. Unfortunately, all men don't understand this. On the contrary, some say things like, "You smell like food," "You're not well-groomed," or "You need to lose weight." I can't imagine how those words make a women feel inside.
I think men should not only understand women - they should devote enough time to their family. If your wife doesn't sleep at night because she looks after the baby, you can help her. If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook, clean, or use services. These things are simple, but when women see them, they feel loved, supported, and cared for.
A family should be based not only love. It's also important to support, respect, help and show feelings for each other - and love no matter what.
Today I want to write about all women.
In mey country, there are many women who give up their careers after getting married or having a children.
I think this is a great sacrifice.
They want to grow their careers, and develop their skills every day,; but in order to to raise a child, they give all this up.
When a woman stays at home 24/7, she always needs to be support, help, and kind words.
Unfortunately, all men don't understand this.
I can't imagine how those words might make a women feel inside.
If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook, clean, or use serviceshire someone.
These things are simple, but when women see themeffort, they feel loved, supported, and cared for.
A family should be based not only on love.
Today, I want to write about all women.
In mey country, there are many women who give up their careers after getting married or having a child.
When a woman stays at home 24/7, she always needs to be support, help, and kind words.
On the contrary, they some say things like, "You smell like food," "You're not well-groomed," or "You need to lose weight."
I can't imagine how those words make as women feel inside.
You could also say "I can't imagine how those words makes a woman feel inside."
I think men should not only understand women - they should devote enough time to their familyies.
A family should be based not only love.
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Great work!
Today I want to write about all women.
In mey country, there are many women who give up their careers after getting married or having a child.
Possessive “my” instead of “me”.
When a woman stays at home 24/7, she always needs to be supportive, help,ful, and use kind words.
If you use “be”…. then it changes to supportive and helpful. Or, you could say “needs to support, help her family, and use kind words.”
On the contrary, some say things like, "Yyou smell like food," "Yyou're not well-groomed," or "Yyou need to lose weight."
You’re introducing quotations that part of your sentence so they don’t need to be capitalized!
If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook, and clean yourself, or ushire services.
“Use services” is a bit vague. Normally you would “hire someone” to help out around the house.
A family should be based not only on love.
Needs a preposition.
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I think men should not only understand women - they should devote enough time to their family. I think men should not only understand women - they should devote enough time to their famil |
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If your wife doesn't sleep at night because she looks after the baby, you can help her. |
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It's also important to support, respect, help and show feelings for each other - and love no matter what. |
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A family should be based not only love. A family should be based not only on love. Needs a preposition. A family should be based not only love. A family should be based not only on love. |
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If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook, clean, or use services. If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook “Use services” is a bit vague. Normally you would “hire someone” to help out around the house. If your wife doesn't have time to cook, you can cook, clean, or |
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These things are simple, but when women see them, they feel loved, supported, and cared for. These things are simple, but when women see |
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