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I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about adults of my country. There are two different types of older people who think, speak better and vice versa. These differences are noticeable on social media, in public circles in general.
For example, when young people do not give up seats for adults on the bus, they start shouting and talking bad things about her parents and upbringing. And when they give way, they can't even thank you. I think it is not true to speak loudly without knowing his inner state, his health. Young people also sometimes have health problems and stressful situations. On such happens, which I saw on the bus, young girls cry, asking for parents not to say a bad word. I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why say bad words when you don't even know this person.
I also had this situation. When I had a very heavy bag, I was sitting. And one grandmother just asked: " Do you have a mom?". And I gave up my seat, I didn't say a word, but I was very offended. Wouldn't it be better to just politely ask for a seat instead?
In most cases, I see that adults want to teach young people to speak correctly and do the right things. On the one hand, this is correct, on the other hand, it is probably much more correct to give young people the opportunity to make mistakes, to gain life experience.
I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about the adults of my country.
There are two different types of older people who think, speak better and vice versa.
I am not really sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe you want to say "There are two different types of older people who think better and those who speak better."
These differences are noticeable on social media, in public circles and in general.
For example, when young people do not give up seats for adults on the bus, they start shouting and talking bad things about their parents and upbringing.
And when they givclear the way, they can't even say thank you.
I think it is not trueright to speak loudly without knowing histheir inner state, his and health.
You could be more precise and say "I think it is not right to speak loudly without knowing their inner mental state and overall health."
Young people also sometimes have health problems and are in stressful situations.
On suchWhen this happens, which I sawhave seen on the bus, y. Young girls cry, asking fotheir parents not to say a bad word.
I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why they say bad words when you don't even know this person.
I also hafaced this situation.
When I had a very heavy bag, I and was sitting.
And oOne grandmother just asked: " Do you have a mom?".
It would be better to say "An elderly woman". This is because you don't know her.
And I gave up my seat, and I didn't say a word, butecause I was very offended.
On the one hand, this is correct. But, on the other hand, it is probably much more correct to give young people the opportunity to make mistakes, to and gain life experience.
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Well done!
I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about adults of my country.
And when they give way, someone does give up a seat,they can't even say thank you.
I think it is not truewrong to speak loudly without knowing hia person's inner state, his or health.
Young people also sometimes have health problems and stressful situations.
On such happens, which I saw on the bus, young girls cry, asking for parenI have seen cases, where young girls were crying, asking adults not to say a bad word.
I think u meant adults, not parents 😊
I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why say bad words when you don't even know this person.
I also had this kind of situation.
On the one hand, this is correct, on the other hand, it is probably much more correctbetter to give young people the opportunity to make mistakes, to gain life experience.
As an alternative "to let young people make mistakes"
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Fully agree! Some adults need to be taught proper manners too
Your text is originally good, i just added a couple of improvements for better reading 😊
These differences are noticeable on social media, in public circles in general. These differences are noticeable on social media, |
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I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about adults of my country. I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about adults of my country. I live in Kazakhstan and I want to write about the adults of my country. |
There are two different types of older people who think, speak better and vice versa. There are two different types of older people who think, speak better and vice versa. I am not really sure what you are trying to say here. Maybe you want to say "There are two different types of older people who think better and those who speak better." |
For example, when young people do not give up seats for adults on the bus, they start shouting and talking bad things about her parents and upbringing. For example, when young people do not give up seats for adults on the bus, they start shouting and talking bad things about their parents and upbringing. |
And when they give way, they can't even thank you. And when And when they |
I think it is not true to speak loudly without knowing his inner state, his health. I think it is I think it is not You could be more precise and say "I think it is not right to speak loudly without knowing their inner mental state and overall health." |
Young people also sometimes have health problems and stressful situations. Young people also sometimes have health problems and stressful situations. Young people also sometimes have health problems and are in stressful situations. |
On such happens, which I saw on the bus, young girls cry, asking for parents not to say a bad word.
I think u meant adults, not parents 😊
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I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why say bad words when you don't even know this person. I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why say bad words when you don't even know this person. I also don't understand what parents have to do with it and why they say bad words when you don't even know this person. |
I also had this situation. I also had this kind of situation. I also |
When I had a very heavy bag, I was sitting. When I had a very heavy bag |
And one grandmother just asked: " Do you have a mom?".
It would be better to say "An elderly woman". This is because you don't know her. |
And I gave up my seat, I didn't say a word, but I was very offended.
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Wouldn't it be better to just politely ask for a seat instead? |
In most cases, I see that adults want to teach young people to speak correctly and do the right things. |
On the one hand, this is correct, on the other hand, it is probably much more correct to give young people the opportunity to make mistakes, to gain life experience. On the one hand, this is correct, on the other hand, it is probably much As an alternative "to let young people make mistakes" On the one hand, this is correct. But, on the other hand, it is probably much more correct to give young people the opportunity to make mistakes |
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