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7777

Aug. 25, 2025

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餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)

我第一的课是”餐厅“。大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。我的朋友有这个课,但是他想变他的东西,所以我该怎么办?我觉得我不会再看他。在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。在学校,我不喜欢吃饭。


my first class is lunch. most people dont have this class (like this period), so im a little lonely. my friend also has this class, but hes thinking of changing his schecucle, so what should i do? i think i wont see him again. at lunch, i use my phone or computer. i dont like eating at school.

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餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)

餐厅是canteen

我第一课是”餐厅““午餐”

大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。

my first class is lunch. most people dont have this class (like this period), so im a little lonely. my friend also has this class, but hes thinking of changing his schecucle, so what should i do? i think i wont see him again. at lunch, i use my phone or computer. i dont like eating at school.

我的朋友有这个课,但是他变他的东西行程,所以我该怎么办?

我觉得我不会再看他。

在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。

在学校,我不喜欢吃饭。

餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)

If 'cafetaria' is the same as 'cafeteria', then you could say '自助餐厅', but '餐厅' works fine.

我第一的课是”餐厅“。

I'm gonna ignore your punctuation marks for neatness, since you already know what the correct form should be.

大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。

我的朋友有这个课,但是他想他的东西课表,所以我该怎么办?

我觉得我不会再看他再也看不到他了

Not really sure what you mean here. Do you mean you don't want to see him or you don't get to see him?

在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。

Logically, you say 'or', but in practice, we say 'and'. I don't know why.

在学校,我不喜欢在学校吃饭。

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7777

Aug. 27, 2025

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i wont get to see him if he changes his schedudle

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LLLeslie

Aug. 27, 2025

1

In that case, my modification is ok.

我第一的课是”“。

lunch: 午餐

大多人没有这个数人都不上这门课,所以我一点点寂寞。

我的朋友有这个课,但是他想变他的东西时间表,所以我该怎么办?

我觉得我不会再看到他了

在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。

在学校,我不喜欢吃学校的饭。

餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)


餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)

If 'cafetaria' is the same as 'cafeteria', then you could say '自助餐厅', but '餐厅' works fine.

餐厅 (cafetaria, ik that translation sucks so fix it)

餐厅是canteen

我第一的课是”餐厅“。


我第一的课是”“。

lunch: 午餐

我第一的课是”餐厅“。

I'm gonna ignore your punctuation marks for neatness, since you already know what the correct form should be.

我第一课是”餐厅““午餐”

大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。


大多人没有这个数人都不上这门课,所以我一点点寂寞。

大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。

大多人没有这个课,所以我一点点寂寞。

my first class is lunch. most people dont have this class (like this period), so im a little lonely. my friend also has this class, but hes thinking of changing his schecucle, so what should i do? i think i wont see him again. at lunch, i use my phone or computer. i dont like eating at school.

我的朋友有这个课,但是他想变他的东西,所以我该怎么办?


我的朋友有这个课,但是他想变他的东西时间表,所以我该怎么办?

我的朋友有这个课,但是他想他的东西课表,所以我该怎么办?

我的朋友有这个课,但是他变他的东西行程,所以我该怎么办?

我觉得我不会再看他。


我觉得我不会再看到他了

我觉得我不会再看他再也看不到他了

Not really sure what you mean here. Do you mean you don't want to see him or you don't get to see him?

我觉得我不会再看他。

在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

在餐厅,我用我的手机或者电脑。

Logically, you say 'or', but in practice, we say 'and'. I don't know why.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

在学校,我不喜欢吃饭。


在学校,我不喜欢吃学校的饭。

在学校,我不喜欢在学校吃饭。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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