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judar

Jan. 31, 2025

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食品工业

我正在读一本关于食品工业的书。这个行业非常有害,只追求利润。尽管主要问题(资本主义)显而易见,但作者却迟迟不愿深入探讨。我认为,如果他真的谈论了这个问题,这本书可能就无法出版了。


I am reading a book about the food industry. This industry is very harmful and only pursues profits. Although the main problems (capitalism) are obvious, the author is unwilling to discuss in -depth. I think that if he really spoke about this problem, this book would not have been published.

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食品工业

I am reading a book about the food industry. This industry is very harmful and only pursues profits. Although the main problems (capitalism) are obvious, the author is unwilling to discuss in -depth. I think that if he really spoke about this problem, this book would not have been published.

我正在读一本关于食品工业的书。

这个行业非常有害,只追求利润。

尽管主要问题(资本主义)显而易见,但作者却迟迟不愿深入探讨。

我认为,如果他真的谈论了这个问题,这本书可能就无法出版了。

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写得不错!

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judar

Feb. 1, 2025

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谢谢!

我正在读一本关于食品工业的书。

这个行业非常有害危害很大,只追求利润。

我认为,如果他真的谈论(触及)了这个问题,这本书可能就无法出版了。

“触及”better than “谈论”。but “谈论”is also correct.

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写的非常清楚。

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judar

Feb. 1, 2025

177

谢谢!

食品工业


食品工业

I am reading a book about the food industry. This industry is very harmful and only pursues profits. Although the main problems (capitalism) are obvious, the author is unwilling to discuss in -depth. I think that if he really spoke about this problem, this book would not have been published.

我正在读一本关于食品工业的书。


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这个行业非常有害,只追求利润。


这个行业非常有害危害很大,只追求利润。

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尽管主要问题(资本主义)显而易见,但作者却迟迟不愿深入探讨。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我认为,如果他真的谈论了这个问题,这本书可能就无法出版了。


我认为,如果他真的谈论(触及)了这个问题,这本书可能就无法出版了。

“触及”better than “谈论”。but “谈论”is also correct.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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