Jan. 4, 2025
《邪教领袖》：关于精神教派的警示讽刺
现在，紧跟我：听我说的话。
如果你想获得开悟，就必须学会服从。
你的自我基本上是必须根除的障碍。
你对解脱感兴趣吗？
道路简单明了。
把你所有的时间和财富都奉献给我。
这样，我将给你永恒的喜悦。
我会把你变成我世界解放计划中合适的工具。
安怡：（扬起眉毛）为什么这个信息对这么多人如此有诱惑力？
大树：人类很容易被骗。
安怡：（停顿）似乎有很多商人，而智慧的启蒙者却很少。
查丽娅：某种程度的怀疑是健康的。
查里亚：保持一定的怀疑态度是健康的。
不要轻易放弃你的判断力。
概要：关于魅力教派和剥削的思考。
关键词：邪教领袖、独裁式的导师、导师独裁、法西斯式导师、法西斯主义的古鲁
Cult messiah: A cautionary satire concerning spiritual sects
Now follow me closely: listen to what I say.
If you want to get enlightened you must learn to obey.
Your ego is basically an obstacle that must be erased.
Interested in liberation?
The path is simple: give me all your time and possessions,
then I'll give you a joy which stays.
Are you serious about awakening?
Then surrender everything unto me.
I'll turn you into a fitting tool for my world liberation scheme.
An-Yi: (raising her eyebrows) Why is this message is so seductive to so many?
Daiki: Humans are easily deceived.
It seems some people want a charismatic leader to give sense to their hollow lives.
An-Yi: (pausing) It seems there are many hucksters and ver few enlightened sages.
Bhäraté: I'm suspicious of anyone asking me to surrender my intellect.
Chariya: A certain of skepticism is healthy. Do not abandon your discernment too readily.
SUMMARY: Some thoughts about charismatic cults and exploitation.
KEYWORDS: cult leaders, gurus as dictators, guru-dictator, fascist-guru, fascist gurus
《邪教领袖》：关于精神教派的警示讽刺
现在，紧跟我：听我说的话。
如果你想获得开悟，就必须学会服从。
你的自我基本上是必须根除的障碍。
你对解脱感兴趣吗？
道路简单明了。
把你所有的时间和财富都奉献给我。
这样，我将给你永恒的喜悦。
我会把你变成我世界解放计划中合适的工具。
安怡：（扬起眉毛）为什么这个信息对这么多人如此有诱惑力？
大树：人类很容易被骗。
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安怡：（停顿）这个世界似乎有很多商人，而智慧的启蒙者却很少。
查丽娅：某种程度的怀疑是健康的。
查里亚：保持一定的怀疑态度是健康的。
不要轻易放弃你的判断力。
概要：关于魅力教派和剥削的思考。
Feedback
非常通顺！
现在，紧跟我注意：听我说的讲话。
如果你想获得开悟，就必须学会服从。
¶¶
你的自我尊基本上是必须根除的障碍。
自我 is more like the sense of self, like your identity. 自尊 is more like self respect, a healthy sense of boundaries. 自傲 is a sense of pride in what you’re good at. All three are very similar, and I feel like you want 自尊 based on the context.
你对解脱感兴趣吗？
道路简单明了。
把你所有的时间和财富都奉献给我。
¶这样，我将给你永恒的喜悦。
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永恒的喜悦 is more like eternal blessing/euphoria. I feel like you’re looking for something more like 心灵安宁 (peace of your soul), culturally speaking.
我会把你变成我世界解放计划中合适的工具。
安怡：（扬起眉毛）为什么这个信息对这么多人如此有诱惑力？
大树：人类很容易被骗。
安怡：（停顿）似乎有很多商人，而智慧的启蒙者却很少。
查里亚：保持一定的怀疑态度是健康的。
不要轻易放弃你的判断力。
¶¶
概要：关于基于人格魅力的教派和剥削的思考。
Feedback
You seemed to have skipped a couple lines in the English. This is how I would translated the first half, preserving the mild poetic rhyming form, just for reference. I would call this sort of things 打油诗 in Chinese, if you are interested.
站稳，敬礼，好好听听：
想要开悟？且需服从。
独立思考？是要抹消。
想解脱？很简单。
时间，钱财，统统纳来；
可无忧无虑，登无穷极乐；
若真心向我，必全委于我！
此后解放世界，你可为之出力。
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你的自我基本上是必须根除的障碍。
自我 is more like the sense of self, like your identity. 自尊 is more like self respect, a healthy sense of boundaries. 自傲 is a sense of pride in what you’re good at. All three are very similar, and I feel like you want 自尊 based on the context. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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这样，我将给你永恒的喜悦。
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