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minimin

Dec. 30, 2019

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今天我在购物中心买衣服。 买二种袜子和一条裤子。想买一件棉外套而那件太贵了。


Today I went to the mall to buy clothes. I bought two types of socks and one pair of pants. I wanted to buy a cotton jacket but it was too expensive.

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今天我在购物中心买衣服。

The easiest way to fix this is to add a “了” to turn this sentence into past tense

我买了二种袜子和一条裤子。

Don't forget to add yourself (我) as the subject of the sentence!

想买一件棉外套但是那件太贵了。

今天我在去了购物中心买衣服。

买二我买了两种袜子和一条裤子。

When using measure words, you use 两 instead of 二 to say two of something (for example 两个小时 instead of 二个小时 - two hours).

Another measure you could use for socks is 双, meaning "pair." To be honest, 两种袜子 sounds a bit strange but it's also technically correct. However, I'm not a native speaker, so I might be wrong.

我想了买一件棉外套可是那件太贵了。

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今天我购物中心买衣服

买二我买了两种袜子和一条裤子。

想买一件棉外套而那件的,但是太贵了。

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rottenfruit

Jan. 2, 2020

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Hope the shopping saga continues!

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

今天我在购物中心买衣服。


今天我在去了购物中心买衣服。

今天我在购物中心买衣服。

The easiest way to fix this is to add a “了” to turn this sentence into past tense

今天我购物中心买衣服

买二种袜子和一条裤子。


买二我买了两种袜子和一条裤子。

When using measure words, you use 两 instead of 二 to say two of something (for example 两个小时 instead of 二个小时 - two hours). Another measure you could use for socks is 双, meaning "pair." To be honest, 两种袜子 sounds a bit strange but it's also technically correct. However, I'm not a native speaker, so I might be wrong.

我买了二种袜子和一条裤子。

Don't forget to add yourself (我) as the subject of the sentence!

买二我买了两种袜子和一条裤子。

想买一件棉外套而那件太贵了。


我想了买一件棉外套可是那件太贵了。

想买一件棉外套但是那件太贵了。

想买一件棉外套而那件的,但是太贵了。

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