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Dec. 10, 2020

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请帮我修改我的翻译

你们好,
我在IG上面,找到了一个关于学习语言的账户。她叫 strawblondiestudies,她的专业是国际研究。她目前学习日语,韩语和汉语,其中她的日语水平是最高的。她这个月分享给大家一个 “30 天的挑战。”我下面把她写的挑战单子翻译成英语。如果你们有时间,请帮我看出错误。谢谢![ ] 是我翻译的部分

我认为一天完成一个任务可以给你得到成就感。如果你们也想参加这个30天的跳钱,我下面会贴上她原来的单子。(更新:我不能贴上原来的单子,明天试试别的方式)

TL = Target Language (我的TL是中文。)

Day 1: Introduce Yourself in 5-10 sentences [使用汉语写自我介绍]
Day 2: Learn 5 words and write a sentence for each [首先学习5个性的词汇,然后使用新的词汇写成句子]
Day 3: Watch a film in your TL (w/o subtitles) [看一部中国电影,但不允许有字母!]
Day 4: Find a studygram friend with the same TL [在IG上寻找一个学习中文的朋友]
Day 5: Spend 20 minutes on a lang learning app [用一个学习语言APP/软件学习中文,至少用它20分钟]
Day 6: Learn the words to a song chorus (learn the whole song) [学习一首歌的高潮-gao1chao2, 必须学习所有的歌词!]
Day 7: Write 3 + sentences about why you study your TL [写一篇短文关于你学习中文的原因/为什么你学习中文?-至少用3个句子来写这篇短文]
Day 8: Learn some onomatopoeia [学习拟声词-ni3sheng1ci2]
Day 9: Read 2 pages from a book (finish the chapter) [读两页-必须读完那个章节-zhang1jie2]
Day 10: Learn 1 grammar point and write 3 sentences [学习1个语法点,然后使用刚学到的语法点来写3个句子]
Day 11: Listen to a podcast [听一个播客-bo1ke4]
Day 12: Learn an idiom/proverb (record yourself saying out loud and share) [学习一个成语、俗话,谚语-yan1yu3 记住录下你说的话,然后分享给别人听!]
Day 13: Write 5 sentences about your goals for your TL [至少写5个句子关于你学习中文的目标]
Day 14: Find and follow 3 new accounts that post in/about your TL [寻找和关注三个学习中文的IG账户]
Day 15: Learn 10 new words and make a story to remember them (record and share the story) [学习10个性的生词然后使用它们创造一个故事所以你能记得它们的意思-把你刚写的故事录下然后分享给别人听]
Day 16: Write 3-5 sentences about your day [使用3-5个句子写成一篇关于你的天的故事]
Day 17: Find a new Youtube channel and watch a video [在YouTube上面 找到一个新的关于中文账户,然后看他们的视频]
Day 18: Watch a TV episode (without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集,不允许看字母]
Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划)
Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信,开始聊天]
Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令,然后录下和分享给别人听]
Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的学法]
Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子]
Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文,然后写出对话的内容,分享聊天的内容]
Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章]
Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西]
Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话,录下和分享]
Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平]
Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词,语法,笑话等等来写成5个中文句子]
Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识,然后在IG上面分享]

真不好意思,我没办法贴着原来的单子。

Corrections

她目前正在学习日语,韩语和汉语,其中她的日语水平是最高的。

Day 1: Introduce Yourself in 5-10 sentences [使用汉语写5-10句自我介绍]

Day 2: Learn 5 words and write a sentence for each [首先学习5个的词汇,然后使用新的词汇写成句子]

Day 3: Watch a film in your TL (w/o subtitles) [看一部中国电影,但不允许有字!]

Day 15: Learn 10 new words and make a story to remember them (record and share the story) [学习10个性的生词然后使用它们创造一个故事所以,因此你能记得它们的意思-把你刚写的故事录下然后分享给别人听]

创造means create, normally we don't say create a story.

Day 16: Write 3-5 sentences about your day [使用3-5个句子写成一篇关于你天的故事]

Day 17: Find a new Youtube channel and watch a video [在YouTube上面 找到一个新的关于中文账户,然后看他们的视频]

Day 18: Watch a TV episode (without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集,不允许看字]

字母means letter

Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划)
Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信,开始聊天]

Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令,然后录下和分享给别人听]

Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的
法]
Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子]

Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文,然后写出对话的内容,分享聊天的内容]

Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章]

Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西]

Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话,录下和分享]

Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平]

Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词,语法,笑话等等来写成5个中文句子]

Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识,然后在IG上面分享]

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curiosity345

Dec. 10, 2020

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Day 18: Watch a TV episode (without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集,不允许看字]

谢谢你的帮助!我没注意打字的时候,选错的zimu! 我也看到你刚修改的部分,也有一两部分我打错字了。处理打错字的部分意外, 你认为我的翻译水平怎么样?

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simmon

Dec. 10, 2020

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Generally you did a pretty good job, hope you can finish this 30-days-chanllenge! 加油

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curiosity345

Dec. 11, 2020

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Generally you did a pretty good job, hope you can finish this 30-days-chanllenge! 加油

谢谢!我也希望我能完成这个挑战!你也加油!

请帮我修改我的翻译


你们好,


我在IG上面,找到了一个关于学习语言的账户。


她叫 strawblondiestudies,她的专业是国际研究。


她目前学习日语,韩语和汉语,其中她的日语水平是最高的。


她目前正在学习日语,韩语和汉语,其中她的日语水平是最高的。

她这个月分享给大家一个 “30 天的挑战。”我下面把她写的挑战单子翻译成英语。


如果你们有时间,请帮我看出错误。


谢谢!


[ ] 是我翻译的部分


TL = Target Language (我的TL是中文。)


Day 1: Introduce Yourself in 5-10 sentences [使用汉语写自我介绍]


Day 1: Introduce Yourself in 5-10 sentences [使用汉语写5-10句自我介绍]

Day 2: Learn 5 words and write a sentence for each [首先学习5个性的词汇,然后使用新的词汇写成句子]


Day 2: Learn 5 words and write a sentence for each [首先学习5个的词汇,然后使用新的词汇写成句子]

Day 3: Watch a film in your TL (w/o subtitles) [看一部中国电影,但不允许有字母!]


Day 3: Watch a film in your TL (w/o subtitles) [看一部中国电影,但不允许有字!]

Day 4: Find a studygram friend with the same TL [在IG上寻找一个学习中文的朋友]


Day 5: Spend 20 minutes on a lang learning app [用一个学习语言APP/软件学习中文,至少用它20分钟]


Day 6: Learn the words to a song chorus (learn the whole song) [学习一首歌的高潮-gao1chao2, 必须学习所有的歌词!]


Day 7: Write 3 + sentences about why you study your TL [写一篇短文关于你学习中文的原因/为什么你学习中文?-至少用3个句子来写这篇短文]


Day 8: Learn some onomatopoeia [学习拟声词-ni3sheng1ci2]


Day 9: Read 2 pages from a book (finish the chapter) [读两页-必须读完那个章节-zhang1jie2]


Day 10: Learn 1 grammar point and write 3 sentences [学习1个语法点,然后使用刚学到的语法点来写3个句子]


Day 11: Listen to a podcast [听一个播客-bo1ke4]


Day 12: Learn an idiom/proverb (record yourself saying out loud and share) [学习一个成语、俗话,谚语-yan1yu3 记住录下你说的话,然后分享给别人听!]


Day 13: Write 5 sentences about your goals for your TL [至少写5个句子关于你学习中文的目标]


Day 14: Find and follow 3 new accounts that post in/about your TL [寻找和关注三个学习中文的IG账户]


Day 15: Learn 10 new words and make a story to remember them (record and share the story) [学习10个性的生词然后使用它们创造一个故事所以你能记得它们的意思-把你刚写的故事录下然后分享给别人听]


Day 15: Learn 10 new words and make a story to remember them (record and share the story) [学习10个性的生词然后使用它们创造一个故事所以,因此你能记得它们的意思-把你刚写的故事录下然后分享给别人听]

创造means create, normally we don't say create a story.

Day 16: Write 3-5 sentences about your day [使用3-5个句子写成一篇关于你的天的故事]


Day 16: Write 3-5 sentences about your day [使用3-5个句子写成一篇关于你天的故事]

Day 17: Find a new Youtube channel and watch a video [在YouTube上面 找到一个新的关于中文账户,然后看他们的视频]


Day 17: Find a new Youtube channel and watch a video [在YouTube上面 找到一个新的关于中文账户,然后看他们的视频]

Day 18: Watch a TV episode (without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集,不允许看字母]


Day 18: Watch a TV episode (without subtitles) [看一个电视剧的集,不允许看字]

字母means letter

Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划) Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信,开始聊天] Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令,然后录下和分享给别人听] Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的学法] Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子] Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文,然后写出对话的内容,分享聊天的内容] Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章] Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西] Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话,录下和分享] Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平] Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词,语法,笑话等等来写成5个中文句子] Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识,然后在IG上面分享]


Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划)
Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信,开始聊天]

Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令,然后录下和分享给别人听]

Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的
法]
Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子]

Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文,然后写出对话的内容,分享聊天的内容]

Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章]

Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西]

Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话,录下和分享]

Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平]

Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词,语法,笑话等等来写成5个中文句子]

Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识,然后在IG上面分享]

我认为一天完成一个任务可以给你得到成就感。


如果你们也想参加这个30天的跳钱,我下面会贴上她原来的单子。


(更新:我不能贴上原来的单子,明天试试别的方式)


Day 19: Write 5 sentences about your future plans [使用中文来写5个句子关于你学习中文的未来的计划) Day 20: Message a native and start a conversation [发给一个中国人/母语是中文的人 一条短信,开始聊天] Day 21: Attempt a tongue twister (record and share) [试试一个绕口令,然后录下和分享给别人听] Day 22: Try a new study method [试试一个新的学习中文的学法] Day 23: Write 5-10 sentences about your favorite things [使用中文来写5到10关于你最喜欢的东西的句子] Day 24: Shadow a conversation (record and share) [偷听别人聊中文,然后写出对话的内容,分享聊天的内容] Day 25: Read an article [读一篇全都是中文字的文章] Day 26: Do something you normally do in your native language in your TL (journal, shopping list, speak to pets etc) [使用中文来解释你一般用你母语解释的东西] Day 27: Learn a joke/pun (record and share) [学习一个笑话,录下和分享] Day 28: Test yourself [测试-ce4shi4自己的中文水平] Day 29: Write 5 sentences using 5 things you’ve learned this month [使用你这个月学到的5个生词,语法,笑话等等来写成5个中文句子] Day 30: Teach someone something you’ve learned this month (make a lesson for IG and share) [教一个人你这个月学到的新知识,然后在IG上面分享] 真不好意思,我没办法贴着原来的单子。


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