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becky82

Jan. 8, 2024

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《说还是不说?》一首诗

时不时不晓得我该不该说。
像一还是零,说还是不说。
我不想说时,你说我该说。
当我想说时,你说不要说。
虽我想说出你所想我想说。
但是不晓得,我该怎么说。


Sometimes I don't know if I should or shouldn't speak.
Like 1 or 0, speak or not speak.
When I don't want to speak, you tell me to speak.
When I want to speak, you say don't speak!
While I want to say, what you want me to want to say.
But I don't know, what I should say.

(PS. This poem reflects a period of frustration during my language-learning journey.)

Corrections

《说还是不说?》一首诗

时不时不晓得我该不该说。


虽我想说出你所想我想说

《说还是不说?》一首诗


《说还是不说?》一首诗

时不时不晓得我该不该说。


时不时不晓得我该不该说。

像一还是零,说还是不说。


我不想说时,你说我该说。


当我想说时,你说不要说。


虽我想说出你所想我想说。



虽我想说出你所想我想说

但是不晓得,我该怎么说。


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