yesterday
语言学习和照顾宝宝
好久不见！我很久没有发帖了。
我最近有大变化。我有宝宝。每天照顾宝宝很忙，时间很快。可是，我还学习语言。
我学过一些语言。我最近学俄语。我忘了一些东西。学新东西很好玩。我也学法语。
照顾宝宝的时候学习很难。我很高兴能学习。如果有人有好方法，请告诉我，谢谢！
语言学习和照顾宝宝
好久不见！
我很久没有发帖了。
我最近有个大变化。
我有宝宝了。
每天照顾宝宝很忙，时间过得很快。
可是，我还是在学习语言。
我学过一些语言。
我最近在学俄语。
学新东西很好玩。
我也学法语。
照顾宝宝的时候学习很难。
我很高兴能学习。
如果有人有好方法，请告诉我，谢谢！
today
谢谢改！
我最近有大很大的变化。
感觉是想表达自己有很大的变化。 下面两种表达也可以 1）我最近有很大的变化 2）我最近变化很大
我有宝宝了。
每天照顾宝宝很忙，时间过的很快。
可是，我还坚持学习语言。
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后面几句多次出现主语“我”，感觉可以合并、精简一下“学习新东西很好玩，让我觉得高兴。我学过一些语言，比如法语、俄语，最近学习俄语发现自己忘了一些东西，如果有人有好方法XXXX”
today
谢谢建议，这样确实更自然～
好久不见！
我很久没有发帖了。
我最近有大变化。
我有宝宝。
每天照顾宝宝很忙，时间很飞快。
可是，我还学习语言。
我学过一些语言。
我最近学俄语。
我忘了一些东西。
学新东西很好玩。
我也学法语。
照顾宝宝的时候学习很难。
我很高兴能学习。
如果有人有好方法，请告诉我，谢谢！
today
谢谢改！
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