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judar

May 9, 2025

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要办些杂事

今天我得去跑个腿。我得买东西,去去取我的新吹风机 (我旧个坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。我琢磨着也给自己买一杯 🤔。


I have to run errands today. I have to do grocery shopping, collect my new hair dryer (my old one is broken 😢), and buy my sister a drink. I think I will buy myself a drink too actually🤔.

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要办些杂事

今天我得去跑个腿。

我得买东西,去取我的新吹风机 (我旧个那个旧的坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。

我琢磨着也给自己买一杯 🤔。

我得买东西,去去取我的新吹风机 (我旧坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。

要办些杂事

今天我得去跑个腿。

我得买东西,去取我的新吹风机 (我旧坏了 😢),然后给妹妹买一杯饮料。

因为故事是渐进的关系,所以加一个“然后”会让句子更流畅一些。

我琢磨着也给自己买一杯 🤔。

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hahahaha,so what kind of drink.

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judar

May 10, 2025

244

chocolate milkshake!

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250093811

May 11, 2025

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waoooo,i drinked milkshake when i'm six years old.
i don't remember how it's felt.

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我得买东西,去去取我的新吹风机 (我旧个坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。


我得买东西,去取我的新吹风机 (我旧坏了 😢),然后给妹妹买一杯饮料。

因为故事是渐进的关系,所以加一个“然后”会让句子更流畅一些。

我得买东西,去去取我的新吹风机 (我旧坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。

我得买东西,去取我的新吹风机 (我旧个那个旧的坏了 😢),给妹妹买一杯饮料。

我琢磨着也给自己买一杯 🤔。


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