April 16, 2022
要不要去锻炼？
你要不要一起去锻炼？
要！
我也要买咖啡。
对不起，我不想买咖啡一起。我会很累。
谢谢你阅读。
Do you or do you not want to workout together?
I want to!
I also want to buy coffee.
Sorry, I don't want to buy coffee with you.
要不要去锻炼？
你要不要一起去锻炼？
要！
我也要买咖啡。
对不起，但我不想买咖啡一起。
It seems to me the original text indicates you would love to buy one but just do not want to buy it with the interlocutor...
但 means but
我会很累。
谢谢你阅读。
要不要去锻炼？
你要不要一起去锻炼？
要！
我也要买咖啡。
对不起，我不想一起买咖啡一起。
一起做某事
unlike English, we put "一起" before verbs.
我会很累。
谢谢你阅读。
要不要去锻炼？
你要不要一起去锻炼？
要！
我也要买咖啡。
对不起，我不想买咖啡一起。
我会很累。
谢谢你阅读。
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