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meilemei

Oct. 18, 2020

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西葫蘆麵包 Zucchini Bread

烘時間:1小時

成分:
400克糖
3個雞蛋
180毫升烹調油
450克切碎的西葫蘆
360克麵粉
5毫升香草
5毫升肉桂
5毫升鹽
5毫升糖
1.25毫升烘焙粉

方向:
* 初3成分合併。

* 餘下成分業合併

* 倒進烤盤。

* 烤攝氏176度

可選: 倒進核桃或巧克力片麵糊


Bake Time: 1 hour
Ingredients:
2C. Sugar
3 Eggs
5/8C. Oil
2C. Shredded Zucchini
3C. Flour
1t Vanilla
1t Cinnamon
1t Salt
1t Sugar
1/4t baking powder

Directions:
* Combine first three ingredients

* Add in the remaining ingredients

* Pour into baking pans

* Bake at 176 degrees Celsius (350 F)

Optional: add walnuts or chocolate chips into the batter before baking

Corrections

* 初3成分合併把頭三種材料加在一起

Combine:混合/結合, you can also say 混在一起.

You can say 頭/首數種東西 to indicate the first several things, actually 頭 and 首 have the same meaning.

Ingredient here means 食材, you can use 食材 too.

* 餘下成分業合併的材料加上

Or 加上/加入餘下的材料
餘下 means the rest, it's okay or even better to remove "的" here though.
Add in means 加入 though, add up means 加上, here you can use either of them, but I donot know if you could do so in eng orz.

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Hope I am not overbearing and annoying, I think your chinese is pretty good, the corrections are all my two-penny worth.

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meilemei

Oct. 18, 2020

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No~
I always appreciate that you give reasons for your corrections^^
It's really helpful!

時間:1小時

方向:
方法?或者是步驟?

* 初3成分合併。
沒看明白什麽意思

* 溫度:攝氏176度

* 烤攝氏176度


* 溫度:攝氏176度

西葫蘆麵包 Zucchini Bread


烘時間:1小時


時間:1小時

成分:


400克糖


3個雞蛋


180毫升烹調油


450克切碎的西葫蘆


360克麵粉


5毫升香草


5毫升肉桂


5毫升鹽


5毫升糖


1.25毫升烘焙粉


方向:


方向:
方法?或者是步驟?

* 初3成分合併。


* 初3成分合併。
沒看明白什麽意思

* 初3成分合併把頭三種材料加在一起

Combine:混合/結合, you can also say 混在一起. You can say 頭/首數種東西 to indicate the first several things, actually 頭 and 首 have the same meaning. Ingredient here means 食材, you can use 食材 too.

* 餘下成分業合併


* 餘下成分業合併的材料加上

Or 加上/加入餘下的材料 餘下 means the rest, it's okay or even better to remove "的" here though. Add in means 加入 though, add up means 加上, here you can use either of them, but I donot know if you could do so in eng orz.

* 倒進烤盤。


可選: 倒進核桃或巧克力片麵糊


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