herondale's avatar
herondale

Dec. 6, 2022

0
表演

孩子: 妈妈,这条项链很漂亮!我想试穿一下。
妈妈: 好吧。小姐,那条项链多少钱?
营业员: 五百元。
妈妈: 算了,我们去另一家商店。
孩子: 妈妈,我想去那家鞋店。他们的鞋很好看。
妈妈: 好,我们去那里吧。
孩子: 这么多鞋!我想买那双凉鞋。
妈妈: 白色的吗?
孩子: 对。
妈妈: 好吧,我会买的。
孩子: 等一下!妈妈,我忘了我的背包!
妈妈: 真的吗?让我们回到首饰店。

孩子: 我的背包不见了!阿姨,你看到过吗?
营业员: 背包?对不起,我没看到过。
孩子: 真糟糕。
妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方?让我们四处看看。

妈妈: 啊,还没看到。不好意思,你是商场的经理吗?
经理: 对。有问题吗?
妈妈: 我的女孩子把她的背包弄丢了。你能帮我们吗?
经理: 我建议你们去失物招领处。在那儿,你会登记你的名字和联系电话。
妈妈: 好,谢谢!

工作人员: 早安!欢迎来到失物招领处。有没有问题吗?
孩子: 我刚才在首饰店把我的背包放在地上。当我回来的时候,背包不见了。
工作人员: 好。请在这里写下你的名字和联系电话。
工作人员: 你的背包是什么样子的?
孩子: 蓝色和粉红色。
工作人员: 请你写下来。

工作人员: 如果我们找到你的背包,或者有人把背包送来,我们立刻给你打电话。
孩子: 谢谢阿姨。妈妈,对不起,我把背包弄丢了。
妈妈: 没关系。不是故意的。
孩子:  但是我太马虎了!将来,我不会那么马虎。


为了中文课,我们需要写剧本。我希望你们能帮助我。谢谢!

Corrections

表演

孩子: 妈妈,这条项链很漂亮!

我想试穿一下。

妈妈: 好

小姐,那条项链多少钱?

营业员: 五百元。

妈妈: 算了,我们去另一家商店。

孩子: 妈妈,我想去那家鞋店。

的鞋很好看。

妈妈: 好,我们去那里吧。

孩子: 这么多鞋!

我想买那双凉鞋。

妈妈: 白色的吗?

孩子: 对。

妈妈: 好吧,我会买的买给你

孩子: 等一下!

妈妈,我忘了我的背包!

妈妈: 真的吗?

我们回首饰店看看

孩子: 我的背包不见了!

阿姨,你看到过吗?

营业员: 背包?

对不起,我没看到过。

孩子: 真糟糕。

哎呀!

妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方

让我们四处看看。

我们到处找找吧。

妈妈: 啊,还没看到。

不好意思,你是商场的经理吗?

经理: 对。

有问题您有什么事吗?

妈妈: 我的女孩子女儿把她的背包弄丢了。

你能帮我们找找吗?

经理: 我建议你们去失物招领处。

在那儿,你会登记的名字和联系电话。

妈妈: 好,谢谢!

工作人员: 早上好

欢迎来到失物招领处。

有没有问题需要帮助吗?

孩子: 我刚才在首饰店把我的背包放在地上。

当我回来的时候,背包不见了。

工作人员: 好。

请在这里写下你的名字和联系电话。

工作人员: 你的背包是什么样子的?

孩子: 蓝色和粉红色。

工作人员: 请你写下来。

孩子: 谢谢阿姨。

妈妈: 没关系。

你又不是故意的。

孩子:  但是我太马虎了!

将来,以后我不会再这么马虎

Feedback

但是标题为啥是表演呢?这是你写的剧本吗?写得很好呦!

herondale's avatar
herondale

Dec. 9, 2022

0

因为我们的老师让我们用剧本表演。谢谢!

孩子: 妈妈,这条项链很漂亮!

我想试穿一下。

我想试戴一下。

妈妈: 好吧。

好的。

小姐,那条项链多少钱?

营业员: 五百元。

妈妈: 算了,我们去另一家商店。

孩子: 妈妈,我想去那家鞋店。

他们的鞋很好看。

妈妈: 好,我们去那里吧。

孩子: 这么多鞋!

我想买那双凉鞋。

妈妈: 白色的吗?

孩子: 对。

妈妈: 好吧,我会买的。

孩子: 等一下!

妈妈,我忘了我的背包!

妈妈: 真的吗?

让我们回到首饰店。

孩子: 我的背包不见了!

阿姨,你看到过吗?

营业员: 背包?

对不起,我没看到过。

孩子: 真糟糕。

妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方?

让我们四处看看。

不好意思,你是商场的经理吗?

经理: 对。

有问题吗?

你有什么问题吗?

妈妈: 我的女孩子把她的背包弄丢了。

我的女儿把她得背包弄丢了。

你能帮我们吗?

经理: 我建议你们去失物招领处。

妈妈: 好,谢谢!

工作人员: 早安!

欢迎来到失物招领处。

有没有问题吗?

有什么问题吗?

孩子: 我刚才在首饰店把我的背包放在地上。

当我回来的时候,背包不见了。

工作人员: 好。

请在这里写下你的名字和联系电话。

工作人员: 你的背包是什么样子的?

孩子: 蓝色和粉红色。

工作人员: 请你写下来。

工作人员: 如果我们找到你的背包,或者有人把背包送来,我们立刻给你打电话。

孩子: 谢谢阿姨。

妈妈,对不起,我把背包弄丢了。

妈妈: 没关系。

不是故意的。

你不是故意的。

孩子:  但是我太马虎了!

将来,我不会那么马虎。

以后,我一定不会那么马虎了。

herondale's avatar
herondale

Dec. 6, 2022

0

谢谢!

Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 9, 2022

0

总体很好,需要改动的地方不多,问题也不是太大。我是第一个改它的,可是太长了,我没有坚持下来。tongxing 改的非常好。

妈妈: 没关系。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

不是故意的。


不是故意的。

你不是故意的。

你又不是故意的。

营业员: 五百元。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 算了,我们去另一家商店。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

表演


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 妈妈,这条项链很漂亮!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我想试穿一下。


我想试穿一下。

我想试戴一下。

我想试穿一下。

妈妈: 好吧。


妈妈: 好吧。

好的。

妈妈: 好

小姐,那条项链多少钱?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 妈妈,我想去那家鞋店。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

他们的鞋很好看。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

的鞋很好看。

妈妈: 好,我们去那里吧。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 这么多鞋!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我想买那双凉鞋。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 白色的吗?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 对。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 好吧,我会买的。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 好吧,我会买的买给你

孩子: 等一下!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈,我忘了我的背包!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 真的吗?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

让我们回到首饰店。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我们回首饰店看看

孩子: 我的背包不见了!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

阿姨,你看到过吗?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

营业员: 背包?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

对不起,我没看到过。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 真糟糕。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 真糟糕。

哎呀!

妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方

让我们四处看看。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

让我们四处看看。

我们到处找找吧。

妈妈: 啊,还没看到。


妈妈: 啊,还没看到。

不好意思,你是商场的经理吗?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

经理: 对。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有问题吗?


有问题吗?

你有什么问题吗?

有问题您有什么事吗?

妈妈: 我的女孩子把她的背包弄丢了。


妈妈: 我的女孩子把她的背包弄丢了。

我的女儿把她得背包弄丢了。

妈妈: 我的女孩子女儿把她的背包弄丢了。

你能帮我们吗?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

你能帮我们找找吗?

经理: 我建议你们去失物招领处。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

在那儿,你会登记你的名字和联系电话。


在那儿,你会登记的名字和联系电话。

妈妈: 好,谢谢!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 早安!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 早上好

欢迎来到失物招领处。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有没有问题吗?


有没有问题吗?

有什么问题吗?

有没有问题需要帮助吗?

孩子: 我刚才在首饰店把我的背包放在地上。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

当我回来的时候,背包不见了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 好。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

请在这里写下你的名字和联系电话。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 你的背包是什么样子的?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 蓝色和粉红色。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 请你写下来。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

工作人员: 如果我们找到你的背包,或者有人把背包送来,我们立刻给你打电话。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子: 谢谢阿姨。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

妈妈,对不起,我把背包弄丢了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

孩子:  但是我太马虎了!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

将来,我不会那么马虎。


将来,我不会那么马虎。

以后,我一定不会那么马虎了。

将来,以后我不会再这么马虎

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium