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easton

April 20, 2022

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衣服

我退休了。
这里的天气每天都一样,温暖,晴朗。
我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。
有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。
你每天穿什么样的衣服
尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里

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我退休了。

这里的天气每天都一样,温暖,晴朗。

我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。

有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。

你每天在你必须整天呆在家里的情况下你会穿什么样的衣服

尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里

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衣服

我退休了。

这里的天气每天都一样,温暖,晴朗。

我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。

有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。

你每天穿什么样的衣服

尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里,你会怎么穿?

feels like the sentence is not complete so I added something

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Very nice writing

衣服

我退休了。

这里的天气每天都一样:温暖、晴朗/既温暖,晴朗。

For the second option, it is just for connecting two adjectives that have similar meaning.

(所以)我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。

Better add some connector to link the reason and result, in this case the connector means ‘so’, but if you dont add it, we can still understand.

有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。

你每天穿什么样的衣服

Need a question mark coz it is a question.

尤其是现在必须整天呆在家里

衣服


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我退休了。


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这里的天气每天都一样,温暖,晴朗。


这里的天气每天都一样:温暖、晴朗/既温暖,晴朗。

For the second option, it is just for connecting two adjectives that have similar meaning.

这里的天气每天都一样,温暖,晴朗。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。


(所以)我每天都穿同样的衣服: 短裤和衬衫。

Better add some connector to link the reason and result, in this case the connector means ‘so’, but if you dont add it, we can still understand.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。


有时候下雨,我只带一把伞。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

你每天穿什么样的衣服


你每天穿什么样的衣服

Need a question mark coz it is a question.

你每天穿什么样的衣服

你每天在你必须整天呆在家里的情况下你会穿什么样的衣服

尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里


尤其是现在必须整天呆在家里

尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里,你会怎么穿?

feels like the sentence is not complete so I added something

尤其是现在你必须整天呆在家里

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