June 12, 2024
苹果在树
这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果。
苹果在树上很高，所以他们拿不到。
首先，爸爸试图摇树，但苹果没有掉下来。
接下来，孩子向苹果扔了一根棍子试试砸下来。他没有打到苹果，但是打到了爸爸。
然后爸爸试图爬上树去摘苹果。树太高了，他够不着。
爸爸向苹果扔了鞋子。不幸的是鞋子被卡住了，鞋子挂在了树上。为了拿到鞋子，爸爸跳起来打了鞋子。
他们放弃了。苹果还在树上。他们离开了。当时他们走开，苹果掉了下来在地上。他么不看见了。
This comic is about a kid, his dad, a tree, and an apple.
The apple is high up in the tree, so they can't get it.
First, the dad tries to shake the tree, but the apple doesn't fall.
Next, the kid throws a stick at the apple to try to hit it. He didn't hit the apple, but he hit Dad.
Then Dad tried to climb the tree to get the apple. The tree was too high for him to reach.
Dad threw his shoe at the apple. Unfortunately the shoe got stuck and the shoe hung on the tree. To get the shoes, Dad jumped up and hit the shoes.
They gave up. The apple is still in the tree. They walked away. At that time they walked away and the apple fell on the ground. They didn't see it.
树上的苹果在树
“**在树”这样的表达很有古意，但现代汉语已经不这样用了。
这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果的故事。
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苹果在树上，很高，所以他们拿摘不到。
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首先，爸爸试图
爸爸先是试图摇了摇树，但苹果没有掉下来。
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接下来
接着，孩子向苹果扔了一根棍子试试砸，想砸它下来。
他没有打到苹果，但而是打到了爸爸。
然后爸爸试图爬上树去摘苹果。
树太高了，他够不着。
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爸爸又向苹果扔了鞋子。
不幸的是鞋子被卡住了，鞋子，挂在了树上。
为了拿到回鞋子，爸爸跳起来打勾了鞋子。
他们放弃了。
苹果还在树上。
他们离开了。
当时他们一走开，苹果掉了下来在落到地上。
他么不们没看见了。
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不错哦，意思表达得明白且连贯。
苹果在树
这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果。
苹果在树上很高，所以他们拿不到。
首先，爸爸试图摇树，但苹果没有掉下来。
¶接下来，孩子向苹果扔了一根棍子试
¶试著砸下来。
他没有打到苹果，但是打到了爸爸。
然后爸爸试图爬上树去摘苹果。
树太高了，他够不着。
爸爸向苹果扔了鞋子。
不幸的是鞋子被卡住了，鞋子挂在了树上。
为了拿到鞋子，爸爸跳起来拍打了鞋子。
他们放弃了。
苹果还在树上。
他们离开了。
当时他们走开，苹果掉了下来在地上。
他么不看见们也看不到了。
树上的苹果在树
这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果。
¶¶
苹果在树上很高的地方，所以他们拿够不到。
首先，爸爸试图摇树，但苹果没有掉下来。
¶¶
接下来，孩子向苹果扔了一根棍子试试图把它砸下来。
他没有打到苹果，但是而且还打到了爸爸。
然后爸爸试图爬上树去摘苹果。
树太高了，他够不着。
爸爸向苹果扔了鞋子。
不幸的是鞋子被卡住了，鞋子挂在了树上。
为了拿到鞋子，爸爸跳起来打了鞋子。
他们放弃了。
苹果还在树上。
他们离开了。
当时他们走开时，苹果掉了下来在地上。
他么不看见了没看到。
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苹果在树 树上的苹果 This sentence has been marked as perfect! 树上的苹果 “**在树”这样的表达很有古意，但现代汉语已经不这样用了。 |
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这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! 这部漫画讲述了一个孩子、他的爸爸、一棵树和一个苹果的故事。 |
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苹果在树上很高，所以他们拿不到。
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首先，爸爸试图摇树，但苹果没有掉下来。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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接下来，孩子向苹果扔了一根棍子试试砸下来。
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他没有打到苹果，但是打到了爸爸。 他没有打到苹果， This sentence has been marked as perfect! 他没有打到苹果， |
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然后爸爸试图爬上树去摘苹果。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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树太高了，他够不着。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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爸爸向苹果扔了鞋子。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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不幸的是鞋子被卡住了，鞋子挂在了树上。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! 不幸的是鞋子被卡住 |
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为了拿到鞋子，爸爸跳起来打了鞋子。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! 为了拿到鞋子，爸爸跳起来拍打 为了拿 |
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他们放弃了。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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苹果还在树上。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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他们离开了。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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当时他们走开，苹果掉了下来在地上。
当时他们走开，苹果掉
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他么不看见了。 他么 他 他 |
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