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atomcdismantling

Nov. 25, 2022

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大家好! 我叫atomcdismantling。这当然是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。我是印尼人,可是我有中国血统。如果我父母没弄错的话, 我的祖先是从云南或者福建来的。但是, 我不会说中文。我正在努力学中文。因为我是初学者, 我可能犯错误。如果是这种情况,我道歉。非常感谢!


Hello everyone! My name is atomcdismantling. This is of course the name of this account, not mine. I am Indonesian, but I have Chinese blood. If my parents are not mistaken, my ancestors came from Yunnan or Fujian. However, I don't speak Chinese. I am trying to learn Chinese. Since I am a beginner, I may make mistakes. If this is the case, I apologize. thank you very much!

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自我介绍

大家好!

我叫atomcdismantling。

这当然是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。

当然这是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。

我是印尼人,可是我有中国血统。

如果我父母没弄错的话, 我的祖先是从云南或者福建来的。

因为我是初学者, 我可能犯错误。

因为我是初学者, 我可能会犯错。

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atomcdismantling

Nov. 25, 2022

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Thank you for correcting me! One quick question: is 犯错误 the same as 犯错?

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me7o

Nov. 25, 2022

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Np! Nomarlly using 犯 and 错误 together as a phrase we just say 犯错.

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atomcdismantling

Nov. 25, 2022

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Np! Nomarlly using 犯 and 错误 together as a phrase we just say 犯错.

啊,我明白了。谢谢!

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me7o

Nov. 25, 2022

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1. 掌握
2. Depends on the context, but "如果是这种情况" isn't too formal
3. 因为我是初学者, 有些时候我说的话可能不是很得体
4. 重述 should be the translation for paraphrase, but people may not undertand it without context as this word is not that commonly used.

自我介绍

大家好!

我叫atomcdismantling。

这当然是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。

我是印尼人,可是我有中国血统。

如果我父母没弄错的话, 我的祖先是从云南或者福建来的。

但是, 我不会说中文。

我正在努力学中文。

因为我是初学者, 我可能犯错误。

如果是这种情况,我道歉。

非常感谢!

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写得非常好!你写得这么好,我想你说得也会很好。

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tongxing

Nov. 25, 2022

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你写的真的很棒!加油加油加油

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atomcdismantling

Nov. 25, 2022

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谢谢你们! It's been around 12 years since the last time I spoke Mandarin. I used translators to find the Mandarin words for 血统, 初学者, etc. I will try to learn this language seriously! By the way, I have several questions:
1. "to master (skills, languages)" 中文怎么说?
2. Is there a more casual way to say "如果是这种情况"?
3. How do I say "I might say something impolite"? I wanted to say that in the " 因为我是初学者, 我可能..." sentence, but I didn't know how to say it, so I had to paraphrase.
4. Lastly, "to paraphrase" 中文怎么说?

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Jack

Nov. 25, 2022

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谢谢你们! It's been around 12 years since the last time I spoke Mandarin. I used translators to find the Mandarin words for 血统, 初学者, etc. I will try to learn this language seriously! By the way, I have several questions: 1. "to master (skills, languages)" 中文怎么说? 2. Is there a more casual way to say "如果是这种情况"? 3. How do I say "I might say something impolite"? I wanted to say that in the " 因为我是初学者, 我可能..." sentence, but I didn't know how to say it, so I had to paraphrase. 4. Lastly, "to paraphrase" 中文怎么说?

1,掌握技能/知识
2,没有更口语的说法了。
3,我可能会说一些听起来不是太礼貌的话
4,意译。用不同的方式来表达相同的意思。

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me7o

Nov. 25, 2022

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1. 掌握
2. Depends on the context, but "如果是这种情况" isn't too formal
3. 因为我是初学者, 有些时候我说的话可能不是很得体
4. 重述 should be the translation for paraphrase, but people may not undertand it without context as this word is not that commonly used.

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atomcdismantling

Nov. 25, 2022

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谢谢!

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大家好!


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我叫atomcdismantling。


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这当然是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。


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这当然是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。

当然这是这个账户的名称, 不是我的。

我是印尼人,可是我有中国血统。


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如果我父母没弄错的话, 我的祖先是从云南或者福建来的。


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但是, 我不会说中文。


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我正在努力学中文。


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因为我是初学者, 我可能犯错误。


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因为我是初学者, 我可能犯错误。

因为我是初学者, 我可能会犯错。

如果是这种情况,我道歉。


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非常感谢!


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