satota, ありがとうございます。Your corrections are very helpful :)

oh, I understand this correction. It literally means you went for a stroll or walk with your dog. Notice how 散歩 (さんぽ) always takes the を particle.

Last week I was trying to get your 日曜日の仲間 to put the adverb near the verb because that's how it's often used. Now satotaさん is saying that it's also easier to understand if we put the adverb near the verb. And although I repeated their sentences with the adjective near the verb, they continued to say it at the start of the sentence.

An idea I have to break this habit is to ask people to write the sentences in the correct order 50 times, take a picture of it and post it to discord. I may come up with something better before Sunday. We'll see.

So while we can say, "I wanted a new car," in English, it appears that it sounds a little strange in Japanese.

Technically, your sentence is grammatically correct based on the information you've learned so far in Genki. If we want to sound like Japanese natives, this is how we'd write or say it.

And remember, I don't lead classes, I lead *study groups.*

This is the same correction nambatsuyoshi gave earlier and the same one I've been receiving lately. We'll get to this eventually in Lesson 11 so hang in there!

We're assuming it's your dog so there's no need for 私.
You're walking *with* your dog so we use と.
I have no idea why it's を歩きます。I'll have to ask around.

oops, just forgot の for the possessive. We can say "Spanish books" in English, but in Japanese it's usually [language]の本.

I guess they usually use 買いたかった in Japanese but 欲しかった is fine, too, so that's why nambatsuyoshiさん marked it as options.

Genki, Marugoto, Tobira all seem to flip back and forth between 授業 and クラス. Again, he marked these as options.

A little note of miffiness: I don't lead 授業 or クラス. I lead 勉強会 (べんきょうかい).

We can use ここ without the で in casual speech but in writing we usually get ding'd for casual speech.
The 〜たりする form isn't taught until Lesson 11 of Genki I. I'm getting this correction a lot, too, so I'm beginning to think the 〜たりする form, instead of the 〜て form, is a more natural way of linking verbs together. I'd mark you as 丸 on this part.

上手に書けています！

oh, and we can see signs for 飲食禁止 (いんしょくきんし) in a lot of places in Japan, especially in museums. It also means, no eating or drinking so we bypass the whole 〜てはいけません part: https://jisho.org/word/%E9%A3%B2%E9%A3%9F%E7%A6%81%E6%AD%A2. This is the way we'd usually see or hear, "no eating or drinking," or "no food or drink" in Japan.

nambatsuyoshiとmari、ありがとうございます。I've just read through everything twice, but there is a lot to review here so I'll have to come back to this page a few more times!　日本語の文法は難しいですね。

賛成した。でも、練習すれば、もっと上手に書けるようになっていきます。頑張りましょう〜！