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Jan. 9, 2023

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(粵)「只想告訴你」

我今日重温咗一個叫做「只想告訴你」嘅動畫。呢個動畫係關於一個好温和但係好容易被誤會嘅女仔叫爽子。佢啲同學覺得佢陰沉,又以為佢可以見到幽靈,所以佢哋避開佢。雖然係咁,爽子好努力咁對人友善。喺高中開始嘅時候佢遇到一個又受歡迎又友善嘅男仔叫風早,一個好成熟嘅女仔叫矢野,同埋一個男仔頭叫千鶴。爽子受到佢哋嘅影響之後就慢慢變得開朗,又對自己有多啲信心。

我上次睇呢部動畫嘅時候都幾鍾意,但係冇留畀我一個好深刻嘅印象。而家係我最喜歡嘅動畫之一。我覺得個故事好簡單但係好感動,同埋個男主角同女主角喺埋一齊好甜蜜。我都好鍾意所有嘅配角,佢哋會支持同埋幫助個兩個主角。喺其他類似嘅動畫入面,通常我會有一兩個唔鍾意嘅角色,但喺呢部就冇。同埋呢,好多少女動畫嘅男主角其實好賤格,所以風早咁好人係耳目一新。

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(粵)「只想告訴你」

我今日重温咗一個叫做「只想告訴你」嘅動畫。

呢個動畫係關於一個好温柔(?)但係好容易被誤會嘅女仔叫爽子。

溫和多用來描述死物。

佢啲同學覺得佢陰沉,又以為佢可以見到幽靈,所以佢哋避開佢。

雖然係咁,爽子好努力咁對人友善。

喺高中開始嘅時候佢遇到一個又受歡迎又友善嘅男仔叫風早,一個好成熟嘅女仔叫矢野,同埋一個男仔頭叫千鶴。

爽子受到佢哋嘅影響之後就慢慢變得開朗,又對自己有多啲信心。

我上次睇呢部動畫嘅時候都幾鍾意,但係冇留畀我一個好深刻嘅印象。

而家係我最喜歡嘅動畫之一。

我覺得個故事好簡單但係好感動,同埋個男主角同女主角/男女主角喺埋一齊好甜蜜。

我都好鍾意所有嘅配角,佢哋會支持同埋幫助個兩個主角。

喺其他類似嘅動畫入面,通常會有一兩個唔鍾意嘅角色,但喺呢部就冇。

同埋呢,好多少女動畫嘅男主角其實好賤格,所以風早咁好人係耳目一新。

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(粵)「只想告訴你」


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我今日重温咗一個叫做「只想告訴你」嘅動畫。


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呢個動畫係關於一個好温和但係好容易被誤會嘅女仔叫爽子。


呢個動畫係關於一個好温柔(?)但係好容易被誤會嘅女仔叫爽子。

溫和多用來描述死物。

佢啲同學覺得佢陰沉,又以為佢可以見到幽靈,所以佢哋避開佢。


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雖然係咁,爽子好努力咁對人友善。


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喺高中開始嘅時候佢遇到一個又受歡迎又友善嘅男仔叫風早,一個好成熟嘅女仔叫矢野,同埋一個男仔頭叫千鶴。


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爽子受到佢哋嘅影響之後就慢慢變得開朗,又對自己有多啲信心。


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我上次睇呢部動畫嘅時候都幾鍾意,但係冇留畀我一個好深刻嘅印象。


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而家係我最喜歡嘅動畫之一。


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我覺得個故事好簡單但係好感動,同埋個男主角同女主角喺埋一齊好甜蜜。


我覺得個故事好簡單但係好感動,同埋個男主角同女主角/男女主角喺埋一齊好甜蜜。

我都好鍾意所有嘅配角,佢哋會支持同埋幫助個兩個主角。


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喺其他類似嘅動畫入面,通常我會有一兩個唔鍾意嘅角色,但喺呢部就冇。


喺其他類似嘅動畫入面,通常會有一兩個唔鍾意嘅角色,但喺呢部就冇。

同埋呢,好多少女動畫嘅男主角其實好賤格,所以風早咁好人係耳目一新。


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